After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Nice chapter.
Great chapter :D
A mother good chapter giggade
Not much to say about this chapter, other then I did like the fact that we did get to see the past few chapters from the eyes of Nightmare Moon. We don't get to see it that much in some fics, but it is nice to see in the end.
Very good POV switch away from the Naruto and the Mane 6 and a great insight of Nightmare Moon's activities. It's good to know that NM isn't letting her first couple of moves get to her head and that things might be fishy as to how simple of return has been. This certainly gives her a bit more depth and even hints of some influences from Luna with her slipping some familiarity in addressing Celestia. NM's interactions with her followers were about on par with what I'd expect of her. No mercy even towards her allies if they displease their dark mistress. The description of the Negasi was very well put together and gave a good reason as to why they follow Nightmare Moon.
my only complaint so far.. you named the 'Thestrals' or 'Bat Ponies' flippin 'Negasi'... that is not clever at all
6484131 are you kidding, okay, it maybe cheesy but, come on, it's short for negative pegasi, I think it sounds cool.
That explains how and why the theastrals were born and why their so loyal to Nightmare Moon since she created them. So shes smarter than her canon counterpart in that she doesn't think shes already won. She does seen like the type of tyrant that would punish her followers for any type of failure no matter how little. Is that a little admiration from Nightmare moon for Naruto. Its completely understandable why Ditzy want to come to but its better that Naruto was able to reason with her. And our first glimpse of Midnight.