After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I liked Naruto's interaction with Luna and Rarity in this chapter. It was very interesting.
I kinda picture Luna scrambling to look for a dress at last minute and celestia just grinning like a ass hole
Might want to do something with the Karuma talk, I thought that was said out loud at first. Woulda been hilarious, but still.
Personal favorite mare would have to be Pinkie. Love how she teases Naruto (well, her and Dash).
As for what I'd like to see more of? I'm always a sucker for anything cute or heartwarming.
So...much...teasing. Poor Naruto, you know he is going to be getting blue balls pretty soon from all this teasing lol. The Naruto and Rarity relationship is starting to become my favorite in this story. I'm kinda hoping Rarity will realize that Naruto is the one for her during the Grand Galloping Gala when Prince Blueblood acts like the d**k he is and Naruto shows her what she's been missing...and then that's when we can start the whole herding process (albeit slowly).
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SSh, I posted the wrong chapter first. No spoilers. XD
No Celestia in that list?
And Luna ofcourse ^^.
Very nice chapter giving us a little more Luna and Naruto interactions. I always do enjoy the fics that go into better detail in how much the Royal sisters control within their domains. Luna setting up the constellations and the night sky is especially one of the more unique and interesting ones. It's funny that both Luna and Naruto are still quite formal to one another here but that should clear up soon enough. I do like that Luna is letting her sense of humor show here and that Celestia isn't the only one to mess with Naruto.
After reading the latest chapter its funny how Naruto and Rarity acted here compared to their soon to be married selves in season 2. That bedroom scene must have certainly been embarrassing for Rarity since she wasn't up to her usual self image and having the stallion she has feelings for walk in on her undignified state.
Also that jealousy turning into a misconception on Rarity's part was hilarious. Yeah, Flutters is crushing on the orange-coated ninja at this point in the story but Rarity's idea that its her Naruto is prepping a date for probably sped up the two's plan to court him.
Sir, we've picking up Slipspace and warp signatures!
Oh bollocks, it's a shipping lane....
6696625 No anything but the...shiping...RED ALERT RED ALERT SHIPS DETECTED BATTLE STATIONS GET TO YOUR COMPUTERS-AND CHOSE WHO NARUTO WILL LOVE SO I CAN THROW A 'NARUTO HAS A MAREFRIEND PARTY'
RUN FOR THE HILLS THE PINK PARTY PONY OF DOOM HAS COME FOR US!! EVER MAN FOR HIMSELF!!!
That's right run, run as fast as you can but you can't run from the ships
7039127 two days later a ship sees the ship lane and the carnage of partied ships and fier ... they were never seen again... Because the ships ate them
This chapter should have been called "In Which There Is Suspense."
Isn't
Bonbon's Secret Agent Code Name, which wasn't reviled until much later in the series?
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i'm of two opinions. author accidentally put that, or... naruto being what he i, and who he is, would be in the know cause he snuck into her majesty' private quarters. aaand.. being from a different world(celesti knows this). see where im going with this?
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Yeah glad you noticed the reference. Well lets just say some slight differences in story background.
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Aah yes. Exactly what I was hinting at. You hit the hammer on the head.