After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Uh oh, is that some division within the ranks of the Nightmare Children? Shadowfright/Nightmare better watch out or he may end up without its most loyal servant when things go bad for it. I don't see Midnight taking the throwing away of Nightmare Moon nicely from here on and that could lead to some backstabbing once Shadowfright gains a body.
Anyway, those were some epic fights between each of the Elements here. The best being Midnight and Twilight duking it out with very interesting magic spells being chunked at each other. Both ended up with a face full of surprises so I can't griped about Twilight letting herself get distracted with things outside of her battle. Midnight was certainly just as cagey as I expected and her prowess in combative spells was a great read.
Hot Streak basically fights like a thug so her match between not only Dash but Spitfire as well was doomed from the start. I'm definitely intrigued on her relation to Spitfire now and I hope to see that plot point expanded. Could she be Spitfires sister perhaps? Who knows, but it should make itself clear soon enough.
Naruto and Perfect Storm's battle was both a great read fight wise and in giving us a better understanding of your OC. Perfect Storm really does need to be killed because at this point he's to far gone to help. It is shocking to read that he was basically manipulated into the Nightmare's services through shady and dark means but I can't say I'm surprised thinking about it. I have a feeling that round three between these two will most likely go in Naruto's favor now that he knows what Storm can do so far and if he does pull a surprise, Naruto can make the right changes to his battle plan.
Fluttershy isn't so shy after all. She may be a pacifist when violence pops up but if you hurt what is her's, she'll destroy you. Hopefully after tag teaming with Naruto and Twilight she'll be confident in her situation when battles pop up. She can still be her caring self, but at least she knows she can handle a fight. I do find that her manipulating of the air currents is a surprise and I wonder if she even knows about? Maybe we'll be seeing Twilight pulling another Pinkie Sense experiment to help expand on it once things settle down.
Well Naruto's doing better now since he knows what to expect. Perfect Storm seems similar to the Joker in the sense that he isn't just insane, he's evil. His backstory is tragic and you can feel sorry for him but you also know that he enjoys killing too much to ever stop and that there only one way to deal with him. Well here Midnight show why she's so dangerous and Twilight's giving her best. A dream come true for Raindow Dash, fighting and flying alongside Spitfire. Twilight really shows that she's gotten a lot stronger and better. All that training for the town is paying off. So this fruit can turn someone into a god. Talk about one wild ride or flight in this case. Fluttershy really proved that when came down to it she will protect her family. Great teamwork between Naruto, Twilight, and Fluttershy and Rainbow and Spitfire. Fluttershy really got to shine here. Hope Rarity's alright. Wow, a little dissolution among the Nightmare Children, seem Shadow Fright isn't going to do what they brought him back for.