After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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AJ must thank Fluttershy for getting Naruto all riled up for her.
Yep, I'd say by giving you a chapter to work out the rust we're back to reading your usual quality in this story. For a one on one chapter involving Naruto and [insert mare here] this was probably the strongest so far. Having Fluttershy take an interest in archery is definitely an interesting twist given her disposition but is probably the highlight of this chapter. Naruto may not be the best at long range weaponry but he's a perfect teacher given his track record with Konohamaru.
As with the previous chapters detailing the growth in Naruto's relationships within his herd Fluttershy has grown from being the supremely shy mare she once was in the story. Sure, she's still the demure mare that unknowingly breaks stallion's heart with her beauty and personality, but at the same time being with Naruto has given her a much needed confidence boost. Having her take up archery on her own is something I couldn't see her doing at the beginning of this story and to have her seemingly wish to learn without outside pressure shows that she isn't a pushover as some may see her canon counterpart.
Overall this was a sweet yet steamy chapter given the last two scenes with Flutters and finally AJ. It's certainly up there with your other work throughout this story.
Archery? Dog bite?
You've taken inspiration from Shy girl and Training session didn't ya?
Or just roll up the pant leg
6690613 right
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If the bite is on the knee and the pants are even a little bit tight, trying to roll up the pants leg would only make things more painful.