After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Well that was interesting. This is really heating up with every chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you portray the characters and have to say that you do a good job of setting up your plot from chapter to chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
when will Kurama get to play
Boy things certainly took a turn for the worst here with Aegis' betrayal and subduing Tia's magic. Definitely surprised me with such a close member of Equestria's military was actually a mole for the Nightmare Children this whole time. It definitely goes to show that even those so close to the light can be drawn to the dark given the right motivations. Hopefully Luna can hold out long enough for Twi to make her way into the battle against Midnight's last shot at overthrowing the Royal Sister's rule over Equestria.
This chapter was a definite step up from some of the previous chapters in terms of detail and word flow and I can safely say that each glimpse of battle between the Elements and their counterparts were well done. Naruto and Perfect's back and forth gave a good showing of their combat abilities and how even they are so far in terms of strength de-powered. Rarity's fight with Vanity was great in dialog between the two with Rarity's grudge against the crazy bitch still on the forefront. AJ just seemed very methodical in her battle with changelings and Rock Head while Pinkie was near hysterics against Tricky. Overall I felt that Dash's fight with Streak was a bit stale in the beginning but should pick up now that the gloves have come off and the armor has been donned.
Finally we have Flutter's and her very reluctant fight against Rush. I loved these scene since even now Fluttershy is still a bit timid to go in and fight but her thoughts in these moments were gold my friend. Even though it may have been a fairly serious realization on Flutter's behalf her somewhat despairing internal monologue on how creeps are always fixated on her cracked me up. I can't wait to see what happens next here now seeing as Fluttershy is going to have to give it her in battle now if she wants to make it out scot free.