After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Great choice in making this chapter be Ponyville focused! It certainly gives sustenance to just how dire things are for Equestria against the Nightmare Forces. Celestia and Luna's somewhat brief appearance here was a nice surprise as instead of taking out a large swath of enemies we see them taking a more command approach here and allow their guards time to shine. OP Celestia and Luna battles get a little old and make you wonder why they have a guard in the first place.
Each of the OC's here had great cameo's throughout this chapter with every single one of the OC's having a moment to shine in their battle prowess. Some more scenes featuring Grand Esteem and Shine Spark would have been nice but they and Shining Armor will most likely have their time to shine soon enough. The fact that Soarin is here on the front line makes me hopeful that Spitfire is also present so we may get the reveal for why Hot Streak hates her so much. If any of the Nightmare forces can be redeemed I'd take Hot Streak at a drop of the hat.
The fact that Naruto seems to be finally connecting to Rarity's dreamscape should bring some interesting scenes to come. I wonder what obstacles ShadowFright has laid for the hero now that he knows that the Nightmare can be defeated? Things are certainly starting to heat up here and I can't wait to read more!
Also before I go here did you seriously name one of your OC's Ashleigh Bell?
That's some meta shit dude and I love it lol!