After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Awesome chapter, can't wait for more
The Element of honesty every- no, wait, sorry. That joke only works with Applejack.
That last one is a bit depressing if you think about it. It basically means they'd say 'generosity is a rarity'.
Because of both this line and the gift itself, for this chapter:
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me either can't wait for more uploads for this story
It nice that Rarity wants to adopt Scootaloo and get some perspective how to know if she was ready to be a mother from her own mother. Raritys really matured over story. Wouldn't this make Sweetie bell Scootaloo aunt? Lol. But a nice bit of bonding between Rarity and Sweetie. The same church where her parents were married does sound perfect. That sounds like a great time to get married when explained. Oak Acres sounded like a good place for the reception and the manager come off as a great guy. But Onix and his herd sound like the usual canterlot noble and completely not what Naruto and Rarity would put up with. Now this Emerald Springs sounds like it's exactly what there both looking for and since there both rich moneys no problem. The engagement party was perfectly done with all there friends and family coming to give them there gifts and there best wishes. And finally the last part was sweet and heart-warming.
Rarity's path to motherhood seems to be going smoothly. Glad to see that she has finally gained enough confidence with Scoot to push forward in fully ingraining herself as her mother. Sure its still most likely going to have a few bumps down the line, but that is parenting 101 in a nut shell. Rarity and Scoots have come to accept each other at this point and all seems to be a go for a very fulfilling family life with so many aunts and siblings to follow.
The second half of this chapter probably showed the smoothest example of wedding planning that can be done. From my own observations with family and friend's special day the pre-wedding details can be hell. Glad the two of them were able to have at least a pleasant and stress free time picking the venue.
Thundershock? Is that Supposed to be Thunder Quill?
Ch.248 Countdown to the Wedding! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
I thought that Rarity's Mother was named "Cookie".
The S from "she" got caught up in the "when".