After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Wait, what? How many students does that Mare has?!?!?!?!?!?!
Oh snap! Twilight no! Hurry Naruto, make it back in time to save her. And right after we got another adorable little moment between the two, then this happens, you tease. Although this does still make me wonder if this actually is the 'Nigthmare Rarity" arc or if it's just Ombra showing up again. It has been a while since I read the comics, but I'm pretty sire that they went after Twilight first, but when that didn't work, they went after Rarity, so it probably is Nightmare Rarity then.
Oh they've ficked up now. No one messes with Twilight.
Well crap. More clop is gonna happen somewhere....I can feel it...
Might wanna re-read this chapter and the last. There are a few places where there's a Bugbear instead of a Bugaboo.
Welp, I'm almost half way through what's available and I'm quite liking it so far, my only real problem that I can think of is the inconsistencies/errors where there's bits of them still being quadrupedal, bits where they have feet and others where they have hooves, words in the wrong order/repeated, wrong names being used and a lack of page breaks to signify a change in scene, that kind of stuff.
Despite that it's still really good, to the point where I actually want to help out with the editing.