After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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.........i like this chapter and yest i hate this chapter.
it's nice and all, but expected more, i mean with Naruto there eh could helped them and met up with both mares and love to see hwo they react to him, would they been charmed and two gossip on the handsoem stud he is, maybe even plan to seduce him together?
Could seen that.
Feels you missed a good chance for some comdey and future romance ideas, or gags.
8321335
Nah, if I'm doing other pairings it'll be for different stories and such.
8323660
I'll be sure to rewrite that when I redo the chapters.
8337456
I agree, that's why I put her in my story. Give it a glanc f you're intrested.
8335777
I'll be adapting some of the stuff, but I don't know, that Changeling origin seems a bit iffy.
8337456
That's more dependent to the writer then the character itself.
8335557
Hhm, I think I did a font change when I was writing this up on word.
8335445
Yeah, that is something I will get around to fixing.
8331016
Yeah this was a rush chapter. I was kind of burning out from combat writing fatigue. I will fix these eventually.
8330913
Yea that's right on.
Why, why does it have to be anthro. Anthro is just cheating.
Other than that, no complaints.
8342574
Because trying to fight non-bipedal fight scenes just suck ass and if you try to emulate the fighting stylr with quadrupeds then you might as well make them bipedal beings in the first place.
8328642
Fixed.
8312108
But it should show that by now the characters have agency and have been able to do things on their own.
8178867
Well, you just know I love my little callbacks. This is part of and I do mean just a small part of the really crazy and complicated stuff that's going to pop up in a later season.
8185548
Yep, this just sets up so many things. I mean come on, a (admit-tingly weakened) reality warper without Discord's cockiness and zaniness in the shadows? Its just fully unbelievable that a serious Discord (who canonically has no defined limits) could be beaten or outmaneuvered by beings who are nowhere near his weight tier. Take away the cheesy idealism and play things realistically and this is how the worst case scenario conclusion would play out without divine intervention.
And early appearance of Twicorn. Oh man I can't wait til I start handling the ascension, we're getting so close in story proper.
8345701 Meh, good luck nuff
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Oh I already know reading through your recent chapters how the character you develop in the later chapter have shown very good progress. It's just another commenter was adding in what I said before I correct myself from that chapter I wrote on. Like I was explain both on that comment and on our last conversation was I mistake another fanfic story using similar aspect from yours and type in the wrong comment board.
But As I stated I know your characters development and story arc really improve, it still kind of muddy but that on my part not reading it clearly. I didn't mean to come off as an a** or anything just stating what My feeling toward characters in story or overused story cliche without context from the show.
8352034
Holy Shit! I didn't even remember this comment of mine!!!
8352177
Nah, I suppose not.
8385043
.....i hope I'm not the only one who perfers Uzumaki over the translation.
Holy crap I'm caught up.
8387871
Yeah.
8416415
Who?
8433134
She's King Sombra fan made female counterpart like Eris is to Discord.
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Oh...I don't believe I will be.