After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I think the arranged marriage combat scenario would be the most interesting.
Always wondered what all of that treasure was used for in the show. Did the Mane 6 seriously leave such a large amount of treasure within the reaches of everyone just because "what's plot"? If so, shame on the writers for over looking such a plot point. Smart move on Naruto's part in trying to use such a resource for the greater good of Equestria. I guess its shame on me too for not keeping up with that little tidbit either.
Pinkie's self esteem issues here were done pretty well all things considered. Doing such a chapter on any character in any fandom is difficult since most characters are written to the point where such problems are minor issues in their fictional lives. If there is any member of the Mane 6 outside of Fluttershy who should have such issues it would be Pinkie. Too most her personality and general strangeness usually comes off as grating and leaves most characters distancing themselves from her. Her friends do so unconsciously but everyday citizens tend to see Pinkie as the town oddity and that is never flattering. Pinkie takes this treatment like a champ but the cracks would certainly be there after Discord's mischief.
As a pony who is seen as such an odd mare it must have been difficult for Pinkie to be seen as anything else other then a wild party mare who could be seen by outsiders as an easy lay. This chapter's main conflict with the would be rapist did seem a bit sudden after Pinkie's reservations over how pony's see her but it worked itself out in the end. I am surprised that the bastard didn't get his head busted in from Naruto's timely intervention; otherwise the chapter's focus on Pinkie did an extremely well job in communicating those issues.