After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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The First one.
Man, I really want to see those interviews now.
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Next chapter. I have some commissions I have to do for some people.
Dont want to be this guy, but why does twinkleshine's name switch to sunshine?
Is her name sunshine (I think that that name is better than twinkleshine anyway)? Or is it twinkelshine?
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Its Twinkleshine, originally the chapter was going in a different direction with Sunshine being Celestia because she wanted to test and see Naruto's valor as a pony, but I decided it didn't make sense since she trusted him with something as major as finding out who the element bearers were.
See, I originally thought the Twinkleshine was Celestia as well, but then I thought about it and saw what you said about how much she already trusts him and realized that it didn't make sense in the end, so I'm intrigued to see if her character goes anywhere later on.
Most. Appropriate. Chapter. Title. Ever.
I've always enjoyed fics that expand on the day to day politics that the Sisters face and the reactions of the other nations when major things happen within Equestria's borders. Even if this was a brief summary of just what Luna has found herself in after being banished, her reaction was about as spot on as I'd ever think it would be. I'd say I feel sorry for her but then I think of the first imbecile who questions her authority and everything goes back to being right as rain.
The first appearance of Twinkleshine was a nice introduction as it brings forth a character that is surprisingly pushed aside for other background ponies. Quite frankly, I think this may be the first time I've read a fic that featured her speaking rather then being a name heard in passing. From this chapter alone, you've done a great job in establishing her background to make her way more interesting then her canon counterpart.
I hope you don't mind...
Sitting?
The first sentence works well on its own. The other two are either unnecessary or redundant.
Then.
“Its fine, I’m Naruto by the way. So what’s your name miss? My name is Naruto.”
He introduce his name twice?
8147592 Fixed.
did Naruto make a herd?
when has that ever stopped him before?