After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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6708387 stupendous? Is that the best you got?
6708932 nah, just a certain dialogue from Scootaloo from the abomination known as "Mare Do Well"
6708814 Nah can't tell you. The less people who will contact her the more she can focus on my art. XD
Perfect Storm's end was by far the most fitting considering he was very much a child with tons of power with little skill to use it. The fight itself was very well done and Naruto's back and forth with the manic stallion was very well paced throughout the chapter. Neither had a clear advantage over the other until the end where Naruto finally seems to have shook off the problem plaguing him in combat. The fact he was mentally holding himself back due to his perceived limitations was a nice turnaround from some of the more recent crossovers featuring the blonde menace. I figured the reason he wasn't able to tap into his full power was because of some mental hiccup on his end but I wasn't sure.
It's kind of strange to know that this arc is finally coming to a close when it feels that the previous one just finished as well but it has certainly been a wild ride. The teaser was certainly a hype way to build up Twi's part in the battle and the little bits dialogue from each of the girls were very well done for a wrap up of their growth in this story. From the teaser itself I have a feeling that Twi may be getting a pair of wings soon enough and I'm completely fine with that seeing as it would be during a battle for the whole of Equestria. Can't wait to see the end soon enough!
"animals that were waiting to be fixed" just does not sound right, now Healed sounds so much Better.
Shouldn't this other one be "If she fell here than the Nightmare would NOT/Never end",
and then shouldn't this be "To be Honest about HER feelings"?
With the build up to this, this fight was a long time coming. So basically after Naruto destroyed his body, Perfect Storm's spirit attached itself to the armor to make itself more powerful. It has been said that there always room for improvements and Naruto has certainly become so much stronger than he was in his old life. Perfect Storm seem kinda similar to evil Kid Buu from Dragon Ball Z in the sense that all he wants to do is cause chaos and destruction for the sake of it and that he completely enjoys it and with how he considers them both gods he would want to show off and play around its a good thing Naruto manage to draw him out of the city so they didn't destroy it. They seemed about evenly matched at first and nether was giving a inch. Perfect seems like a overeager little kid who wants to show off a new toy and throws temper tantrums when he doesn't get his way. Good thing Trixie, Gryff, and Zecora came when they did and Naruto feeling his bonds with all his friends giving him strength seem very similar to when Sora was about to fight Riku and Xemmas and he felt the strength of everyone connected to his heart and he said: My friends are my power. I think Naruto had more than enough dark reflections of what he could have been. And that puts a end to Perfect Storm, now just the Ursa, the Queen, and Midnight left to deal with but all the gems that made the dark armors seem to be gathering in one place, that's pretty ominous. That teaser was pretty exciting, can't wait for more