After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Woohoo update loving the story glad your keeping it going despite so many chapters glad your hanging in there
Yay an update, no need to rush though just take your time with updating. So many chapters, longest story I've ever read
7672394 I agree too my friend longest story I've read can't wait for the next update either but we both have to b patient
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I think that the pairing will happen only after Naruto ascends, Celestia will just look at the alicorn Naruto with a blank face, Naruto, being himself, would flex his body to show off in a joking way, Celestia wold simply say "Screw it" and pounce on him
7687474 This scene was co-directed and mostly written by someone else. A few of these scenes from this story I actually outsourced from some other people so if they're familiar to other works you've read that is why.
7687319 No, its not from that angstfest. The scene is actually based off one from a Harry Potter fanfic I read a long time ago and Tonks personality happens to be a lot like Pinkie Pie.
7692579 Lol shit. Yeah I have a hard time with loads and loads of characters.
Aaand I'm caught up.
Good story.
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...Moar Plz.
7689626 Goddamnit fimfiction, the reply notifications keep snubbing your comments for some reason so I didn't see this until now.
Anyways, that scene wasn't referencing a fanfiction or anything, it was an almost direct rip of this:
That was a interesting opening to this chapter. Course the title of this chapter is rather telling. So Cadence and Pinkie are planning ways of getting Naruto and Celestia together, couldn't Luna help them with that. From this description Celestia seem lonely in a since that she doesn't have the companionship that Luna and Cadence have but chooses to bear it for her subjects since she feels she might not put them first. A great way to describe the ball room and the crystal ponies style of dress clothes since they have been out of the loop for a long time. Dancing is always a good way to break the ice but with how stubborn they both can be Cadance might have her work cut out for her. Awesome chapter and can't wait for more. By the way, since Chrysails and her hive are ally to equestria wouldn't that change how season six plays out? Especially the last parts. Would this work: if a changeling queen could love and be loved in return. What do you think?
7724399 It's one of the English translations of his actual last name, 'Uzumaki'. To quote the Naruto wiki:
7724399 Whirlpool is the english translation to Uzumaki. Considering how names work in the Fim universe it makes sense to directly translate it into something the locals would understand.
7706406 Well my point still stands about 'other works' though. I've incorporated either suggestions or chapter bits from stuff people have sent me like how I incorporated their original characters. So I did not know recognize the scene because of how much I have to juggle.
7711718 I've hardly figured out ideas in that regard.
7728320 That's fine, I was originally just upset at the fact that they cut out the best part of the scene, the quote that pretty much everyone has heard at least once.
"Some men... just wanna watch the world burn."
7728321 Oh well sorry for getting a bit ahead there, but would it work?
That's just evil man! I was at the edge of my seat there for a good ten seconds as I thought we were finally getting the long overdue Naru/Tia scene out of the way. Way to leave a fanboy hanging, ya know?
On that note, I do feel somewhat sorry for the pair as having both the Love Princess and the Party Queen teaming up to scheme ways to have Naruto bang Tia already as being just as cruel punishment. Cadance is just as scary as Pinkie when love is the goal and being an alicorn on top of that is even scarier as she makes more progress in the shipping of Naru/Tia. Faust rest their souls and pelvic region.
Ch.246 Operation Sunstorm:Pre: Planning Stages - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.