After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Grrrr shoot him and cut out his tongue .... Then trim that scraggly beard
Naruto is going to have even more problems with the nobles... Because he did not have enough headaches with them...
yay character plot advancement!
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If they actually introduce him if I'll rewrite him in
6634808 Ok, thank you.
Alright, you definitely made Opaque and his father enemy number for the herd and without going to far into a character's backstory as to drag down the chapter. Trixie's reveal of her "family" was short and to the point with some obvious holes here or there that will probably be filled when the time comes but the chapter actually did good in liking Trixie in the story now. The girl has issues that have long since persisted without help and I'm guessing that all of those bottled emotions finally burst out here in the worst way seeing her "lovely" brother again. No wonder Trixie has a tendency to speak in third person if she was hardly acknowledged by her "family".
Naruto abusing his status as a Canterlot/Equestrian elite to foul Opaque's attempts to ridicule Trixie was a breath of fresh air from slugging the prick and gave way to a very satisfied read. Most likely it will subtly bite him in the ass later, but I figure Naruto can handle whatever retribution the Luminous family has for him. He has a whole herd of outraged mares behind him and I can see some definite feminine fury once Opaque makes another appearance.
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His Name is Zephyr Breeze and is in the Episode "Flutter Butter".
Also he calls Fluttershy "Big Sis" and is also referred to as her "Baby Brother" even when he looks older because he is taller than her.
This was a painful and unwanted family reunion for Trixie. From how he acts, Opaque clearly enjoys seeing Trixie suffer and they really can't be called siblings since he been treating her like this for years. Naruto coming to her rescue was nice and probably the first time since her mother passed that she heard someone stand up for her. From the sound of it, her mother was the only one in her family that loved her, especially when her father couldn't bother to call her by name, not to mention only seeing her as a means to increase his own glory and standing and her brother goes above and beyond to make her miserable. A lot similar to Zuko situation with his father Ozai in scaring their assumed talentless child and his sister Azula in rubbing their father's favoritism in their face in jealousy of assuming their mother love them more. It will be one big complicated family when he marries all the herd. Now the whole herd knows about Beatrix's story, they'll do what they can to be there for her and help her heal like a true family. A great in depth look at Trixie's character and giving her more back story and setting the stage for some interesting character development.
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You forgot shoot his tongue.