After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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The overlord better not be Naruto
Wonder who the Overloard is
7910738 probably
So Rare apple has Applejack`s strength and perseverance and Rarity`s precision and keen mind. Rainbow pie has Rainbow dash`s speed and skill and Pinkle`s unpredictably and energy. And Flutter sparkle has Fluttershy`s shield skills and courage and Twilight`s magic and genius. The guy can definitely fight, makes you wonder who he really is. The hero always makes a late arrival lol.
7910084 Well that makes you better some other since you take the time to fresh out the characters and show how long they've know each other, there interaction with each other and where there attraction to each other came from.
Damn, that's a clever idea of Twilight to combine two ponies together into one. And what a damn good fight. Curious to see who this Overlord is.
This chapter definitely makes a 180 degree turn in favor of our heroes. Outside of the names being a bit off sounding, I thought the fight scenes and the defeat of the robot copies were nicely handled. The fusions give a very Steven Universe vibe whether intentional or not but I'm OK with that. They showed skill and strength to overcome some obstacles but on the other hand still show some inexperience against the unknown. If it wasn't for Luna and Naruto's arrival, I fear the girls would have been the catalyst to the Overlord's mad plan to 'better' Equestria for the coming storm.
Ch.258 Mechanical Empire: The Fusions vs Overlord! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.