After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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So does this chapter take place before Ch. 138, where Twilight calls out Pinkie for this incident?
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No. I went back and edited that part. Sort of forgot considering how long some of my hiatuses have been.
Nice chapter. I feel a bit bad for Gryff feeling like Naruto's abandoning him and all, but I think things will work out eventually. You seem to have a way of doing that. Can't wait to see how you continue things and what happens with the seal on twilight.
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Secondary unicorn character introduced early on. She hasn't served her major role yet.
Loved this episode when it first premiered and you did a great job of including Naruto in Pinkie's attempts at making right with Cranky. The beginning with Griff bored out of his mind was a good way to start out the chapter and his actions after were pretty much on par with how his character has been made out to be so far. Subtly checking out his bro's girls while waiting definitely sounds like something he would do in this instance and his back and forth with Naruto was well done. Let's hope AJ or Rarity doesn't catch him in the act of admiring the herd otherwise he may be in a world of hurt by way of female fury.
Naruto and Pinkie's interactions are still a joy to read about and I'm happy to see that the two are having plenty of moments in recent chapters. Again, out of all the girls I feel that Pinkie is right behind AJ and Rarity when it comes to screen time with Naruto right now. Case and point is Naruto calming the whirlwind that is Pinkie Pie in making a new friend. Having a rational mind in the wake of Pinkie's somewhat childish view of friendship has helped rein in the pink mare's exuberance but the episode wouldn't be the episode if Pinkie didn't try so hard in gaining Cranky's friendship. That and in the end we still have the Cranky and Matilda love that made the episode so satisfying to watch in the first place.