After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Nice training montage for Naruto.
Nicceeee
What if just one time Naruto demonstrated the power of sage mode or even using Kurama's chakra to show the princesses how powerful he was
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Why would that matter when Naruto himself knows his own limits?
5745871 eh... Maybe it's just me but I haven't been caught up with Naruto lately so I'm not sure about his power so it's partially for the readers and also if I was in the princesses position then I would be a little skeptical of Naruto's potential
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Reread the story, this shouldn't be something you'd think if you were following things closely.
First,
What is 'their charges'? I don't know what that means. Am I misinterpreting it or is it a Naruto thing?
Second, what is Naruto's defense against unicorns? Can't he just be levitated and be pretty much beaten? What good is his strength if he can't utilize it? I'm sure there's an answer to this, I just want to know what it is.(Again, I'm not familiar with the show)
Third, what happened with Naruto's relationships during those two months? If we're getting a time skip, will we at least get a summary of what happened?
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Uum no, what are you going on about? Just levitating something is not beating them. Not when A, that person doesn't have infinite magic so they can't levitate that other pony forever and B. If the other combatant has ranged weapons.
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Hey, don't get so defensive. It was just question; a legitimate question, I feel. What I meant was what's stopping an enemy unicorn from just levitating him(And thus restraining his limbs) and then just stabbing him with a sword or spear? I obviously didn't mean that Naruto would be levitated forever, I just meant he'd be levitated long enough for the enemy to get a lethal hit on him.
The only answers I can see would be Naruto overpowering the levitation magic with his own strength or him taking advantage of a special ability he has. If the former, what's his limit? How powerful would a magic user have to be to actually restrain him for a useful amount of time? Could Shining Armor do it? Could Luna or Celestia do it? If the latter, then what ability does he posses to counteract such an incident from occurring? Again, I don't have any knowledge of the show; that's why I'm asking you for information.
Don't take my comment to be hostile. I'd think of it as a compliment. I'm only asking questions because I want to know more about the world you are writing about, after all. Also, could you respond to my other questions in my last comment?
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A sufficiently trained soldier. There's no barometers on the show so I have to work on establishing that. Defenses would include substitutions or clones.
I'm still in the process of setting all of this up so future content will cover and explain all of this.
So Naruto has finally started to train his body to adapt to his new form? I was wondering when this was going to happen and who better to train him then one of my favorite characters, Shinning Armor. I was always curious what he was doing during the events of season 1 and 2, but I do like how you made him Naruto’s trainer to help him get stronger. Didn’t really think you would include Negasi in your story, but I guess if Luna is going to be a main focus of this story, her guards will need to be a main focus too. I’m hoping to see more of Dusk Treader later on, I really did like her character.
I know this is fanfic and power level are susceptible to change and what not in a story but in Cannon vs Cannon Base mode Naruto FTW no matter what. So I have said it I am the pro Naruto crew he kick the shit out of 98%of all foes and this is Fanfic so anything gose love the story love how the plot is. But I will always be that Guy who will say Naruto would win a true no hold bar fight nuff said
Very cool that we finally get to be formally introduced to Shining Armor and Cadence within the story. Hard to believe that before this chapter they were passing mentions from the cast so far and are now the main focus of the current Wedding Arc. Time certainly fly's by with this story as it progresses.
For an intro for two characters, you nailed both of the royal couple's personalities greatly given their less then frequent appearances on the show before this chapter was published. Shining Armor is as cardboard feeling as his canon counterpart and Cadence is very much Cadence here. The fact they are providing commentary over Equestria's guard problem is also a bonus since it shows they are very much involved with the problems that the country faced after Nightmare's first return.
I almost forgot Naruto's incognito status within basic training here and the racial tensions the Negasi faced before Luna's return. The handling of this little problem feature Dusk Treader was done spectacularly and get's me wondering if we'll see her again. I may have missed some cameo's of her in future chapters but it would be cool to see how she's progressed since day one.
Nice job on this chapter!
anyone else listen to rocky's montage theme?
I agree Naruto.
lastima que Shining Armor no sea un imbecil para que Naruto se lleve a Cadence