After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Bah, that would require the writers to put more effort into their writing and we can't have that. I mean its not like people should expect much more quality in a show, no matter the demographic.
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Yes, god I hate that. I hate people who love those stories too. Don't have your OCs be tons better than the canon villains to the point they crap on them and overtake the plot for like the entire story. Incredibly annoying.
Its also annoying, look just how intelligent and powerful we got in the background, as if the villain's actions somehow didn't effect us at all villains ocs that are so prominent. How the hell would they have escaped unnoticed by the canon villains? At least mine make sense.
Remnants of the first villain's forces as well as inconsequential to the might of the second villain, but can slot into place now that he's gone. Then again it helps that I beefed up the canon villains in the first place. XD
Not for nothing but I think someone is creating profiles on the site just so they can dislike your story and probably others as well seeing as with the release of multiple chapters you your dislike bar continues to grow versus your likes bar but I do love your stories so yeah seems kind of unnecessarily shallow and dickish but don't stop your stories are awesome don't let anyone tell you to stop because they suck if anything them saying you should stop is motivation to prove them and everything they say 100% unequivocally wrong hey the Beatles put it best "you say goodbye when I say hello
don't stop
love your work
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I believe that. Some people are pathetic and have nothing better to do with their lives unfortunately.
Didn't know that mini Barney had it in him.
Oh Boy those Diamond Dogs are dead after what they did
So how will be for Spike Training to be complete?
This chapter got dark I mean really DARK.
But in all seriousness great chapter.
6291573 Beefing up FiM villains should be mandatory for anyone writing action based stories. We are talking about a show that was originally made for children 2 and up so we couldn't have had too scary villains. That's why I feel the comics are slightly superior to the show since the villains are given more depth instead of, "Oh no! Look! It's this weeks bad guy wishing to stop friendship!".
6291559 As long as it turns a profit there isn't a reason to change what's not broken. I mean we certainly can't have the show take on more mature and worldly themes as our base audience grows up into a world that's not all sunshine and rainbows. Nope we'll just milk it for the cash cause people are easy.
...and with that it brings out the sad fact that MLP:FiM will only ever be remembered as that oddity of modern television that somehow attracted a major adult fanbase who will be ridiculed for liking something below their age level.
6291844 Too bad they sacrifice the intelligence of the main characters in a few of them in exchange.
6291919 Yep, gotta love it when Twilight for example takes an I.Q. drop because she suddenly spun the idiot ball.
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Huh? What do you mean?
6292012 Oh you know whenever a simple problem pops up and Twilight instead takes the hard way around or overreacts to counteract it.
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Oh okay. Yeah that.
Excellent chapter as always. One of the few stories, that I have read, in which Spile is not a complete and total door mat for every pony!
And that ending was so great ah young love.
So mind telling us how long he's going to be gone? Or are you just not going to tell us to make his return that much more epic?
On second thought don't tell it will keep me on the edge of my seat.
Now those Dogs well at least they got what wa coming to them.
…a moment of silence for all those that have been killed by the forces of darkness…
You will all be missed greatly may you forever rest in peace in the afterlife.
But every thing else aside great story so far I really do love this story and keep up the good work.
I'll read ya later-BFBL
Very good chapter on helping Spike make up his mind on whether or not he should leave to train. It was certainly a dark way in reaching his decision but it most likely brought home the fact that the world is not made up of sunshine and rainbows. I would definitely like to have seen the others POV and Twilight and Celestia's conversations but we can't always get what we want and I have worked out the basics of what those conversations went.
Also you gotta love Lyra being her blunt, tactless self and not thinking over what comes out of her mouth. Truly I feel for Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops and putting up with some of her "best friends" manners.
I just laughed at this.. am I a horrible person?
6939173 reminded me of how Yoda spoke
The fight between Spike and the Alpha reminded me of Natsu vs Zero for some reason... maybe it was the flashback.
Also, I love how this can be used to explain his absence during certain episodes. Whenever he's actually needed for one you could explain it as him visiting home during a break in training or something.
Great Spike focused chapter. Lyra and Bon Bon are always welcomed appearances and its good that they could see past the growth incident and that Spike wasn't his normal self. The advice Bon Bon give him was good and Lyra's bit was funny. Well Sweetie Bell going to Rarity for advice is pretty in character for her and would have been a cute moment between her and Spike if those Diamond Dogs hadn't ruined it. The expansion on them was welcomed since we hadn't seen them since season one even if it's a dark expansion but not everything is all sunshine and Rainbows. Spike's fight with them was very in line with what he could do at that point and even though he took a beating at first, Spike managed to pull it together and find the strength in himself to overcome it and save Sweetie Bell. Spike finding a real reason to get stronger is a great start to his character growth. The moment with Spike and Sweetie Bell was a nice way to end this chapter.
Not only did Spike learn the Lightning element, but also tapped into Aether for the first time! Awesome!