After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I thought fluttershy said fight camp lol.
6235734 well she DID open up a can 'o' whoop ass on harry the bear
Maybe she did go to fight camp and just wandered off to flight camp accidentally
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So umm where you go? Haven't been seeing reviews. XD
Great recap of how the Mane 6 received their Cutie Marks! This was short and to the point unlike the usual dragging out that this episode suffers from in fanfics. Also I'm happy to see that Spike and the CMC are likely to be hanging out more in the story and hopefully see more of an active role in season 2; outside of their kidnapping of course.
6237131 Sorry about that dude. I've been having to help my parents move off and on for the past three days and that has left my reading time severely staggered.
6235999 First rule of fight camp, don't talk about fight camp.
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I'll see what I can do about their roles. Especially considering I'm completely altering their canonical plot line.
6239327 One of my main hanging points to OC or Self-Insert fics are if they don't make the effort in giving their stories substance by making episodes different or expanding details to add a more personal touch to the fandom they are writing about. When its just copy and paste with some unneeded dialogue added onto the story then you as a writer have some problems. Sure some episodes are just filler and its OK to somewhat fudge it by going word for word with the episode but to do it throughout a story just kills me. If you go that method then just focus on the details that are ignored by the show such as what the perspective of the background ponies or by filling in some of the plot holes that are riddled throughout the episodes.
6239070 Fight Club reference .