After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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SoOoOon!
Well damn...chakra is now being introduced to pony life.
Go on Celestial!!! This overlord is cheering you on!
KNEW IT!!!!!
Glad I've taken the time to actually read this fic from the beginning. I was a bit weary when I saw the dislikes but that was put to rest after seeing that the main cause was most likely due to the anthro-phobes and non-harem shippers. Naruto so far is a nice change of pace compared to his usual brash and impulsive that is the norm in MLPxNaruto fics here and for that I gotta give you some major props. Your Naruto is definitely one that I could picture after the series and his interactions between the Mane 6 and others are a joy to read. This has certainly become a nice page-turner with each chapter keeping my attention.
I will say that there are still some very noticeable grammar and spelling errors within the first ten or so chapters, but since then I've only caught maybe two or three minor hiccups. None of these are drastic problems but it would probably help the story in the long run if you could take a day going over the story with a fine tooth and comb and dust up these issues. Other than that, I've found the story to be quite easy to follow and I enjoy your inclusion's of Naruto into canon events. Usually I find such inclusions to be lazy since the events are copy and pasted from the series but you make just enough tweaks that make the events of the episodes fresh.
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Why of course. Copy of episode with oc added in with extra dialogue that doens't influence anything is all the other stories. XD.
Yeah I hate lets keep characters with their childhood behavior long into their adult years. Its rather annoying. People grow up and change and are three-dimensional, something a lot of writers then to forget. I also didn't want to completely throw out canon because of how integral these events are to the characters.
Unfortunately the mistakes are the result of me not finding the right beta. They're all trying. XD. I still haven't found one. Well that and I could probably do it, but too busy writing the new chapters in order to spend time triple checking.
The other fics of this crossover are unfortunately a bore.
And yes all those dislikes are crossover msianthropes and harem haters. XD. I can't think of any well thought of or worthy to read criticism for this story besides grammar/spelling errors and like those. Those critiques I will full heartily accept because I have made those mistakes, but other than that nothing else that explains the dislikes.
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TO be honest that line was born from me reading a ton of daw fics starring Luna. That line was born from the dialogue of so many other fics. XD
6221181 Yeah, I think the only other fics here on the site that I have seen with the same stigma for dislikes are the sequels to Spiders and Magic by Maximus-Reborn.
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Because Mah Waifu. XD. But yeah I haven't read that fic myself, but yeah you some people are purists. If its not what they like then its bad.
6221193 Yep, little Woona is just too adorable for here own good.
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CH 100 is going to take me a while, but I should have one more chapter out tonight.
6221312 Don't sweat it. I'm just now on Date: Twilight after marathoning it since yesterday afternoon and I still have so many more to go.
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I would like to really see your thoughts chapter by chapter if thats the case.
6221381 Can't promise much but I'll try to go back to some of the one's that definitely stuck with me. I'm one of those readers that waits until a good amount of chapters are published (i.e. 10 or so) before I sit down and blitz through them. I blame cliffhangers from ff.net on that little quirk.
The Author lives! The tailed beasts get some recognition and Celly getting on board?
Gentlemen we have true literature here.
Looks like Tia is starting to have feelings for Naruto!
GOD DAMMIT TIA!!
Well Naruto and Celestia's witty back and forths really shows how much they know each other and how much they've bonded. That list was interesting too. So even sage mode can't escape the wrath of a annoyed sun goddess heh. That slow dance sounded sweet even if the rumor mill will go crazy again. Cadence being able to sense if ponies are in love with each other makes sense. Overall even more hints at Celestia's feeling for Naruto, can't wait to see when they finally get to together. That will be a awkward conversation to have with Twilight and Trixie about being in a herd with their teacher, heh.