After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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It was kinda sweet to watch Naruto comfort Ditzy.
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It only makes sense for someone of Twilight's intelligence to have a pretty good handling of math.
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Different body, different biology.
I half expected Luna to get into this convo actually.
I'm confused. In what chapter did he reveal his past to them. I think there might be a continuity error here.
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THROUGHOUT VARIOUS Points in the story. You just have to have been paying attention.
Any possibilities about Twilight, Luna and Celestia joining into Naruto's herd?
Creating a character from what is basically a blank slate that really has no personality or characterization in the show must be hard, it must be even harder to give her a backstory that fits the character you made so this is what I liked about the chapter. I did like how you went with the fact that Dinky and Amethyst are her daughters, considering most people seem to skip over that. I’m even more surprised you went with Amethyst being adopted, it’s a nice little change that goes a long way.
Very well done bit on adding some backstory and a background to Ditzy's character. Even though this chapter was written to show Ditzy's feelings for Naruto I believe it did a better job in setting up Ditzy as more then everyone's favorite background pony. I do enjoy the silly one-shots following "Derpy's" misadventures but I do prefer stories where the author took the time to add onto her character as being more then just clumsy.
The flashback as to how Ditzy met Naruto is certainly a 180 compared to when the two were first shown interacting in your story. It definitely shows that the two grew way closer given that Ditzy was waiting for the inevitable backlash that came with meeting new pony's this chapter. Luckily for her she met the one pony that could somewhat relate to her in that pony's/people didn't want to associate with them.
The conversation between the girls and settling of some doubts and agreeing on how the herd would initially be ran was well done and each of the characters dialog along those line fit within character. The fact that Ditzy's initial doubts were brought out and just as suddenly shot down was probably a great break for the mare so early on here. Too bad she then had to let her self-doubt set in again when the rest of the Mane 6 and a Princess joined in the end.
Also the bit where Pinkie rightfully points out that Naruto may in fact be an ass-man was a hilarious way in shaking some of Ditzy's self image problems while being her adorably random self.
Please tell me he has a mustache and wears glasses.
That which to play for the othet side. Are vile of corruption of nature, should be cleansed in fure and brimstone!