After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Huh, I wonder why the anime never did fusion?
7879648 Lol, dude, spoil your comment. XD. But I have no idea what series you're talking about. They did in the anime, but not between two human characters.
Fusion mane six against mechanical mane six. Can't wait to see that battle
7879651 awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks
I know that some of this comes from Naruto, but real talk, this introduction to the combined forms of RariJack, RainbowPie, and FlutterLight really reminds me of Digmon Adventure: 02. I say this because in that anime, the six Digidestined were able to DNA Digivolve into three separate beings, similar to the Mane 6 here combining into those three warriors.
The kids from the U.S dubbing had Ken and Davis as one, Yolei and Kari as a entity, and finally T.K, and Cody were the third. I forget the names of the three, but simply put, this was the feels that I got from it. And honestly I was quite surprised with it.
Come to think of it, the whole Mechanical Empire part of this, also reminds of the Sonic the Hedgehog Archie comics, specifically the ones where there's battle between Sonic and his friends as they battle Metal Sonic, even all the way down to the desire to absorb everything Equestrian into the Machine Empire...
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I don't know bro. You're saying that this story is going to span over 2.7-3 million + words? The Chase and DoaM might still have you beaten out by that point.
7897114 Meh, if I have to I'll make it ten million. There's still three seasons (A possible fourth) four equestria girl movies, and all the comics worth of information to draw inspiration from.
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Well, beating Whatmustido is... possible with DoaM. But last I heard, we're not even past halfway of season 3, and not anywhere close to being halfway done with the story itself.
But if you're aiming to beat Kudz... can't be done, sorry. Dude is not human. He is a machine that exists in this world to churn out horse words for our entertainment and the only thing that can stop him on The Chase is the fact that he'll run into the barrier that is 1,000 chapters because that's the limit. Otherwise, the story WILL keep going. And when (or if, if he wants to make the chapters longer which is what he should be doing) that happens, he'll just make the sequel.
7899564 Bah, then I'll just make chapter 1,000 literally one million words and continue on with my own sequels.
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Well, if you wanna be here for years, possibly decades, then go for it dude.
7809876 Yeah well you know, I like the build up, but avoid the unnecessary pitfalls of having over a million words like some writers. People can actually end up in a relationship before forming a deep, all encompassing love for each other.
7741975 Be on the lookout for another story I'm writing called Another Possibility.
Hm, this overlord seem like he regrets what he's doing but he believes its for some greater good and those kind of villains are sometimes the most dangerous . Are the mecs just testing the girls? Great way to include future Twilight in the story. Its interesting to have her come from a actual bad future. Using the combination transformation is pretty inventive, bet no saw that coming. Things are getting good.
Very, very nicely done opening battle to start the climax of this arc! The Overlord, whomever he is, screams to me as a self-imposed martyr when it comes to bearing the weight of whatever dire fate Equestria faces in the near future. I can certainly appreciate s noble cause such as protect the world of Equus, but the Overlord's agenda and way of doing so just speaks of hypocrisy. Each of the small montages of the Mane 6 being pummeled by their copies were both nicely written and strung along perfectly. The girls certainly got a taste of bitter defeat before they regrouped to form their fusions!
On the other end of the spectrum, Twicorn's appearance was a very great way to give the good guys at least a fighting chance by fucking up the timeline even more so. I hope once the shock and adrenaline of the battles we get a bit more detail in Twicorn's showing up so soon. Because from what I've gathered up to now, Naruto and the group are way, way to under-leveled to take on Strife, his band of flunkies and Xer's arrival.
The Spacing is a bit to wide in this Chapter.
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That depends if you count the Twins in Orochimaru Sound Four/Bodyguards. In a way, they could fuse together.
Ch.257 Mechanical Empire: Originals vs Copies! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
Also, I Just Love The Fusion Names and their Looks also sound just Lovely. I bet Naruto could have some Kinky Fun with them.
And Twicorn sounds Super Cute By The Way.
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Kiba and akamaru's twin headed wolf technique.