After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Aah yes thank you. I'll fix that right now.
Is it going to be just Kurama or are the other eight going to be here as well?
The fighting scene was amazing.
5258761
Its a hold over from the previous version of the story.
5259160 How's the next chapter coming along.
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5258761 you have a chocolate key board for a picture
I have seen 3 different types of Anthro hooves commonly done. So is it human-like feet with a hoof instead of toes, like the legendary Red Shetland (A.K.A. Slipper Hoof), a foreshortened canon bone between the ankle and hoof (somewhat normal MLP legs on an anthro body, A.K.A. Jack Legs), or a normal hoof straight below the ankle?
While this is similair to the fight between Nightmare Moon, Naruto and Luna from the original version, the small changes here and there does make it better, even if just a bit. The whole idea of Luna's subconcious being the moon was something that I always liked in stories, but the whole Nightmare Moon being a type of parasite that fed off Luna's grief and sadness was just awesome, plain and simple.
Damn it! Why must filly Woona be so adorable?! It should be a crime for her just existing.
Overall I really enjoyed this chapter mainly for the interactions between Naruto and Luna's filly self. The whole chapter was spot on in Naruto's actions towards Luna and finally Nightmare Moon/Shadowfright. The battle flowed seamlessly and didn't have an awkward moment throughout the chapter. Yes, there are few errors here or there but they don't distract the reader from the action taking place here. The memory of Tia's regret was a very well done scene and was a great catalyst too Luna letting go of her fears in face of the Nightmare.