After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I really like the interview with RD, especially with the way she teased Naruto with her cutie mark and her measurements, though I'm also intrigued by her past.
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I just put up the Blog Interview that hints more at it. Which of course will be a major part of her backstory in the story proper.
I say do a marem, but keep it reasonable. One naruto fic that I read had no less than 25 girls in the harem, and every other girl in the world wanting to be a part of it. It's things like that that ruin stories. I would make it small like a couple of the main six, and 1 or 2 freinds.
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Yeah I know, but its less egregious now because I'm running low out of conversion chapters so a lot of the future stuff will be original content. Other then that everything else is rather enjoyable right?
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Meh, 25 is a bit weird. I think the issue is some people want to do ship tease, but they probably don't know how to cut it off at ship tease.
Leave it to Rainbow Dash to tease Naruto when asking about her cutie mark, but nice job on keeping Rainbow Dash’s character the same as her TV show counterpart, but with a little bit more mature then her pony form. I didn’t really take her to be sensitive about her height, but I guess everyone cares about their image, now matter how small. I’m curious about her past now though; guess I’ll just have to wait till later to see what happened.
I will say that so far out of all of the herd members I enjoy the Naruto and Dash moments the most. Out of all of them I feel that they click the most and have a better kinship in certain aspects then the other girls. Every chapter that features a NaruDash moment just lights up the whole chapter in how complete they make each other. That and outside of Derpy I feel that Dash may have the easiest time in flustering Naruto; she just has to actually work at it to accomplish the feat.
Very happy that you didn't make Dash sub 5'5'' which most anthro writers seem to picture her as (outside of the ridiculous 7'+ anthro stories). I understand that Pegasus seem to be on the small size in the show but having her as the shortest girl kind of just annoys me. I also enjoyed how this chapter is such a stark contrast compared to Rarity's own interview. Then again, Dash is one of the most brash ponies in Equestria and I doubt she cares much about social niceties.