After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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You know when he said vocalize feelings i immediatly thought maud is an elcor in disguise (elcor is from mass effect look it up i dont wanna type the whole thing)
Was really looking forward to this chapter and it definitely lived up to my expectations. I was originally skeptical with the sudden appearance of Maud but her episode totally won me over. She's a great contrast to Pinkie and their chemistry was rather well written for her episode.
Anyway, it was nice too see that you bumped this episode up since I feel a lot of us were waiting to see how Naruto handled Maud and her unique personality. I'd always had in mine that they would make great friends since Naruto dealt with Gaara on a semi-regular basis and we know everyone's favorite human racoon was the king of stoic once Shukaku was silenced. Outside of some early grammar issues, the chapter was great and I felt that Maud and Naruto's interaction were very spot on and is definitely a highlight of the story so far. It was also nice to see another Pinkie-centric episode since they are always a fun read. This is mostly due to the fact that a good number of writers just don't like writing Pinkie other then for comedy effect. Then again, I've felt that Season 4 Pinkie left a lot to be desired since the writers just seemed incapable of writing her outside of being very grating to downright daft and not in the funny way.
I will say that I can't wait to see some more Ditzy/Naruto moments since she seems to be kind of lost in the action of season 2, but its understandable given she has way more responsibilities on her plate then normal. Then again I am bias when it comes to the Bubbly One.
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That's part of the emphasis I've been putting. Unlike all the others Ditzy is an employee and a mom. She can't shift her schedule around as easily as the others meaning more often then not she'd be left out.
6295750 Eager agreement, yes she could very well be indeed given her personality. Amused response, the elchor would probably fit right in within Equestria if you think about it.
6295831 That could be a good plot device in which she questions her worth within the group which is composed of a Goddess who moves the moon and the 7 paragons of Equestria. I can definitely see Naruto shutting that line of thought down about how awesome of a pony Ditzy is without being a combat ready mare.
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Yeah, I'm already planning future set up for that and all that, lol. What can I say? I tend to Oda these things.
It's uncanny how much Maud and Pinkie are alike
Maud Pie came in Early but hey it your story
*Cough*
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or maybe it because its an new timeline that I didn't understand,then sorry dude.
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Well essentially smiling for the first time they had known or see her. I guess it wasn't that clear.
For the past few chapters you've used first person words like "we" and "I" by mistake but I'm too lazy and engrossed to bother to point out where
(reads the part with Pinkie's 'dance')
This is actually the second fic I've read with a scene where she did that... but you knew that already, didn't you Kyuubi?
*coughIt'sComplicatedcough*
Because that's her nindo.
#sorrynotsorry