After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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If I'm getting this right there is going to be a tournament between the solar and lunar guards? This sounds like fun! If I'm reading it right that is.
7444233 Not a tournament. It was going to be a single match, but now I don't know what I exactly want to do.
7445712 Yah I read into that wrong then. I could see a nice little tournament going on. But you have so much going on the way it is. This story itself is close to 250 chapters. And at the pace you are going it I can very well see it going on for another 100+ chapters.
Plus all of your other stories. It really depends on how much time and energy you want to put into it.
Now If you are unsure of what you want to do.
Well a full blown tournament seems a little excessive and time consuming. Depending on how much time you would be willing to spend on this.
You could go with the planed single match.
What about something like a paintball match between a select number of guards? But you know less paintball-y. Oh wait did you not have a paintball fight in this story already or am I thinking about a another story?
Idk whatever you choose. You are an excellent author who clearly knows what he is doing. All I know is whatever lies ahead I will probably not see it coming.
-BFBL
7446012 Paintball guns? The hell.
7446695 I meant like a game of capture the flag. Paint ball what was I thinking.
7446695 good little chap and Celestia in a form fitting dress. Rawr!
Yep, you gotta love a chapter that mainly focuses on the the Royal sisters plus a soon to be alicorn princess.
Twilight is certainly putting Kage bunshin to good use if she's whittling down thesis' left and right. I kinda feel sorry for any library that she sets her sights on in the name of her research as more then one Twilight Sparkle would make any fellow academic quake in their boots. Would definitely like to see some reactions from the others concerning Twilight and an army of clones.
Gotta feel for the majority of royal guards having to both effectively protect the Sisters while at the same time fighting boredom. Too bad said boredom gives way into noticing certain anatomical parts too their princess'. Great way to set up revealing new OC's and their personalities.
Reading about Celestia being both embarrassed and getting out-pranked by two of the ponies she holds dear is a great way to end the chapter and hints that her walls in not getting close to Naruto are crumbling. Now I just can't wait to see them finally hook up.
7446695 was a bit tighter then their normally more conservative princess wore and ass a result it highlighted a certain something
Great pun
Ch.233 Happenings in Canterlot - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
You Just Got To Love Those Flanks.
It seems even Luna is trying to Help Naruto and Celestia get together, also that Spit-Take was Perfectly Timed as well as Well Placed.
I Do Wish that there was at least One Luna Emoticon to Use, and Maybe a Discord one too.
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I believe that was another story.