After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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*grooooaan* ...Soooo... ...Tiiiiireeed...
(sees new chapter)
*blinks* ...Sleeeeep... ...Weeeeaak...
(gets to the Author's Note)
...*whimper*...
7844322 Going for a story, only for a pairing is a shitty reason to read the story. If that's all you care about, might as well drop the fic as I don't want to spoil he results of the pairing for everyone else just for one person.
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You know, you are right. Honestly, I just started reading this right in the middle. It's over 250 chapters, so I'm mightly impressed that you actually wrote out 250 of them, and apparently still writing. And truthfully the first thing I saw was that rejection, so obvious that was a bit of a thorn. What can I say, I'm a sparity fan. But I'm pretty sure that bit of a thorn will be mended as I read more of this.
Though in hindsight, it's a grave mistake that i'm 'piegon-sighted' at that ultimately little thing that is really unnecessary in the long run. That's childish as hell, and an insult to this epic that you're penning. I do have to start at chapter to get a grasp on everything.
I have to admit, I'm not really familiar with Naruto, but I have to say you have very impressive grasp of his character, and how you mended him with the Mane 6.
...off-topic, I said 'pigeon-sighted' because I can't remember the term for focusing on one thing while ignoring everthing else about it.
Also, I'm gonna to delete my previous comments from them. They're complete inappropriate for the story, especially where I haven't really dug into it at this time. Please accept my apologies. As I start from chapter one, I'll make my own comments for the story, and even if there are things that personally I don't jive with it, it's your work, and there is much, much more to this, than Rarity rejecting Spike for purely reasonable and loving feelings. I do like how you are handling Spike with Sweetie Belle---it's awfully sweet. I'm definitely looking to the chapter where Spike returns.
Right. Let's hope that timeline A (current path leading to hell) is stopped by Twi's brilliant but desperate spell. Can't believe that Pinkie would go out like that, but considering how everything seems to be going to hell in a hand basket for our heroes, that's on par for the course of this bleak future. AJ's death scene was hard to read all in one go as she's one of my fav's and reading Twi's desperation in saving her 'sister' was harrowing to stomach. Maybe with Discord's olive branch we could see some changes play out, but considering your Discord is way more villainous than canon, you know he's got strings attached to benefit his interest (aka continued existence).
Ch.255 Mechanical Empire:Dark Future and Unexpected Ally! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.