After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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This was a nice chapter, very interesting reading about the dragon encounter. My only question is about the saddlebags that Twilight put on before they made the trek up the mountain: Wouldn't it be a backpack or some sort of shoulder bag, seeing as they are Anthros in this story? I just wondered about that.
On to the questions you asked: Harem size? As big or as small as you want. I mean, it's cool seeing Naruto interact with the Mane 6, but it might be interesting to see a relationship with one of the Princesses, like Celestia or Luna. No doubt Naruto and the Princess of the Night have much to discuss. Or maybe one of the side characters, like Lyra or Vinyl.
Favorite Character? Well, besides the obvious choice of Naruto himself, and my own bias towards Rainbow Dash, I'm going to have to say it's a tie between Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity. Fluttershy acts really cute around Naruto and I just love how cute she gets, Pinkie Pie teasing Naruto, enough said, I like that, and I liked the history that Rarity and Naruto built up. It actually might be interesting if the Mane 6 paid a visit to Naruto's dojo for an chapter.
Romantic Relationships? Rainbow Dash because she's awesome, Luna because they'd have much to discuss about their pasts, and Fluttershy because she reminds him of Hinata, his wife.
Who's interview??? Um... isn't Applejack the only one left? Or do you need to do Twilight as well? I guess Applejack, because you should probably do Twilight last, if you even need to.
Fanon Ideas? Not sure, I did once hear that Lyra was an Auxillary in the Royal Guard, or an off-duty, undercover member of the Royal Guard, and a master of the only Unicorn Martial Art, the Still Way. That's just a rumor, though.
And Applejack or Pinkie Pie next. Well, I don't know how much you've written, but I think you should go with Pinkie because we know a little about Naruto's interactions with the Apple family, having saved and been saved by members, but we know next to nothing about his relationship with Pinkie, other than they flirt and tease a lot, or at least Pinkie does.
That was long but I hope it helps!
I just thought of something I can't wait for him to meet discordl
Personally i think that the harem should be of the Mane six, and the royal sisters. I like the character traits in Luna, and twilight.
As for popular fannon concepts. You should try to(before the harem forms.) Have the Mane six go into heat at the same time. And then have naruto go through awkward situations trying to avoid them.
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That's probably going to be a bonus non-canon arc or something. I've read plenty of those stories, my main gripe being either there's too much angst or I've read all the good ones already.
Also that one is kind of expected.
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Well introducing Zecora is coming next, then the dinner with Luna, and finally Applejack and the Apples development. The reason why I use Saddlebag even if it may be incorrect because of the Equine/Horse puns of course. I know it should be backpack but I couldn't help myself.
Depending on whether or not you read the old version, anyone who has pretty much know that Twilight and Luna are the only ones definitely confirmed. The rest are up to the whims of fate. I think we all know Fluttershy trying to seduce someone is going to be way too cute and have too much humor potential.
I think I might be saving Pinkie Pie for last after Rainbow Dash as a surprise arrival is going to be occurring soon which will give us major development for Pinkie. I pretty going to be doing Pinkie's major strides back to back to back.
The lyra thing is already strongly hinted at in story. I think you might be referencing Xenophilia which is where I got the inspiration for Naruto's relationship with Rainbow Dash.
As for the flub in the Fluttershy interview. I wrote this chapter before I wrote the Fluttershy interview. Same with the next chapter I haven't posted yet. All I can say about the next chapter is we get the introduction of Zecora which might take me a while as I try to figure out her dialogue.
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My only issue is that I haven't gotten around to Twilight yet. I still have a lot of old Twilight material from the previous fic I have to reintroduce as well as the Captain Naruto sub plot. I still have plenty material from the old fic I just need to convert it so its fluid.
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I'm about to ruin your day. XD. He, Celestia, and Luna are all going to take levels of Badass during that course of the fight. Now you must sit in anticipation for when that inevitable chapter comes out. XD
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Dude I worry every day and manage myself so I don't have to worry about it myself. Definitely a life wrecker.
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Look I sent it to my beta. How about what you like about the chapter?
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You know, you've been betaing but I haven't seen your feedback on the chapters lately.
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Yeah that's me bringing in old sections from my previous story to save time. XD. I have over 350 stories so trying to manage so many has me overlook things at time. Also I have a job as well and only recently just finished a semester at college. Its time consuming.
5229375 Haven't seen any feedback from you. You still with us?
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Have you enjoyed the Rarity centric chapters I've been putting up?
5450678 Sorry, didn't know if you wanted my opinion on your story. I can let you know what I think of the story if you want me to.
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That's pretty cool. Could you go and review a chapter by chapter basis. I couldn't handle it if you did your thoughts all in one review. The block would be too huge. XD
5450666 I hate you
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Lol I forgot for a moment I sent you a comment to troll you. What ascended form name do you think is better? Solar Flare or Eternal Blaze? XD
5448554 Sry dood, no offense meant. Got it myself too... Makes it easier to tolerate if I joke about it... No need to take things so seriously............
It pains me to see Naruto so weak. Would really like for him to get his original form back. I know I've already said it.
5453532 The spell screwed him up. He would have won otherwise. In fact that happened for a reason. Part of the subplot of this happening in this chapter is Naruto looking into a way to gain a tougher resistance to magic. I'm playing upon this particular trope and going the subversion route.
That chapter was also important to give a reason to give Naruto and Twilight to spend more time together and grow as fans. He doesn't want another incident that happened in this chapter to happen again and he being unable to help his friends. It won't matter how much of his strength he earns back if he's going to be vulnerable to magic. That I wanted to showcase.
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No it doesn't. The title is actually correct.
I really liked this chapter a lot and it is one of my favorite episodes from season 1. I was kind of hoping for some of Naruto's power to come back during the fight with the dragon and kick it's sorry flank, but I did like how it ended. I was also surprised that the dragon could become anthro and any time, kind of makes me wonder if Spike would be able to do that in the future too. Shine Spark is a very interesting character too and I do hope to see more of her in the future. While she does seem to be a lot more serious then Twilight, you can tell it's from her training in the royal guards and she is just looking out for her neice.
This has always been one of my favorite episodes from the show since it was the first one I actually sat down and watched. Sure, it has one of the biggest flaws story wise, but other then that this was a great showcase of Fluttershy not being the third wheel within the group. The episode allowed us a great chance to see how each of the group initially handled such a delicate situation with an hostile opponent and gave us a pretty good idea on each of the girls take on a situation that could get hairy.
Overall the handling of this episode was the thing that gripped me the most since from the viewers standpoint Celestia was sending 6 untrained mares on a very dangerous quest without a hint of backup. Yeah, they did just defeat Nightmare Moon a couple of episodes back and other randomly dangerous occurrences but c'mon this was just silly. You want your 6 national heroes to tangle with a dragon who had just settled his hoard? Be real MLP writers.
This chapter was fairly close to what most of us could see as a realistic outcome to such a situation if Celestia was written as a competent leader. Outside of Spike, dragons are very rare to show up in Equestria outside of the migration so of course this should be handled as a diplomatic manner. Don't want to cause harm to it or any civilian foolish enough to mess with it so guards are a given for being on the scene. At this point this could very well be seen as just a precaution since Naruto is there if things go south and his actions throughout the chapter were well done and not overshadowing the Mane 6 during the meeting and its resolution. The action here was greatly done and as I said before Naruto did just enough as to not come away looking like a juggernaut when he fought the dragon. It was ultimately a team effort outside of Fluttershy cowing the dragon in the end.