After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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ask Celestia to give him
a badge to be abele to get info.
explain it as another way for
him to be abele to help her
ponys.
I have a feeling that Naruto's escape from the bandit camp may not go as smoothly as he entered it. Especially if a Condemned is really part of their group.
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Sweet! Love the way you ran Amber Wands in this!
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Ppft I'm already ahead of you.
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well you are the author
you should already be
ahead of me
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Showing moments where they are lone badasses so the badass teamup moments are even better.
"They were strong but they were stronger."
Yeah that's just one big error, definitely a lot more. I like your work but highly suggest you do another overview of this chapter again and correct them. There's more errors then usual in this chapter then most the others I've seen
cool chapter
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You wanna beta?
5537778 the stop, stop the friendship is overwhelming
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Sure I'll do it.
Post your raw chapter so you won't fall behind send that raw to me and I'll check it over then send it back to you so you can re-post it.
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Up to 47 was betaed for me. Once I start getting more chapters written out I'll send them and see if I'll stick with you. Depends on feedback.
You know, for an OC character, I really did like Amber Wands. Most people that add OC’s usually just add the characters in with no rhythm or reason and just kind of have them say a couple of lines and then leave. Hoping to see more of this OC in the future later on though, wondering what her connection with Princess Celestia is and why she had Naruto go retrieve the dagger. Speaking of which, I was actually surprised that none of the Condemned were actually behind the robbery and that it was just a small group of thieves. Still, it was a good chapter, we got to see Naruto kick some major flank against those robbers and it was nice to see Twinkleshine again after so many chapters.
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Of course, there is a reason for everything. The Condemned will eventually make their appearance, but after much setup. I'm tying up the romantic plot lines in the ensuing chapters before finally moving on to the Royal Guard Arc.
Man, I can't believe I didn't get a Fairy Tail reference here! The whole job on a bulletin board just bleeds Fairy Tail too me, man. The job itself was a fun read as Naruto decimated the bandit camp and taught them the true meaning of pain. It was probably cathartic to actually beat down on an enemy without worrying about the girls getting in the line of fire. Twinkleshine's reappearance was a nice break in between taking the job and locating the bandits. I do hope that we see more of her as this story goes past season 2. Her character is quite refreshing given that most of the other major OC's are very far from normal (i.e. Midnight).
5537778 http://bloodyriley.deviantart.com/art/Equestrian-Heroes-Scene-95-612058987
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She looks great! Thanks for getting this scene done up with Amber Wands.
Amber wands face in that picture is like, bitch what you want
Got anymore spots open for OCs? Just curious here cause I have an OC you might find interesting. Oh & if you do have any open spots, mind contacting me via PM?
I couldn't help but get a Tsunade vibe from Amber Wands in that pic.