After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Monotmous dating structures is a sin. I hate seeing that. But yeah I wanted to really focus on/flex the characterization. Also its nice to have some dates go awry while some actually do go perfect. The fact that people always have something go wrong is annoying and a bit overplayed.
But yeah, I'm going to try my best in keeping with the tune of ever growing characterization for the characters.
for a minute there i thought it was tirek by the way are any of naruto's friends from his world gonna make an appearance like the condemned find out that naruto is not from this world and try to summon his friends and wife to hurt him or have discord do it if not still a cool story.
Okay here we go; pre read comment time.
I don't actually know what to think of this one. From the description it sounds interesting.
I really hope its not a trainwreck of a story.
Time to get reading.
Signed, Luna Eclipse
6221697
Bloody hell no. That's just a dumb idea and always ruin the stories.
6222105
hey it was just an idea but you did say "get a connection to the other eight" so i assume you mean the other tailed beast
6222189
That is not something typically done. Whenever people bring in other Naruto characters they always take over the plot with typicla Akatsuki bs and it usually bogs down the story.
6222189
I'm bringing in the Bijuu, but thats it. No other Naruto characters.
6222581
I've luckily never had to deal with that. But yeah I want and like my characters varied and fun.
6222968
Rarity is always the most underused. You really don't see her unless its 'sex' 'sparity' or 'badly handled' fics and its a shame people can't seem to understand that flawed people can still be good and heroic characters.
6222968
Did you get my message about reviewing the old chapters from the beginning? I would like to see your feedback for the chapters before I edit and fix them up.
I thought Nightmare moon was coming back. huh....
Does that mean discord is gonna be the evil asshole that has to be killed in the story?
Celestia why don't you come up with a plan to stop him, you have 6 months.
Well cute way to start this chapter. Haven't had a Naruto and Luna moment in a while. Their time together was really sweet to read and can't wait to read how they grow closer. Celestia seem to have dreams of the future or at least of future threats. Celestia really can be stubborn when she wants to be. And the ending has some very ominous foreshadowing.