After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Your starting to go overboard with the harem. At max put just 2 more, but after that no more or you run the risk of ruining the flow of how the romance is going
i dont agree with the comment that somone put on there its not good. oh and good job
She is bringing the Princess of Shipping into this, wow Pinkie wasn't kidding about the big guns.
6949685 I though that the picture for the story showed all the mares Naruto is getting with. so I don't think there would be more
This is a great story with a lot of detail. You can really see how far the characters have come from the first chapter and you can see just how different your take on naruto is compared to the end of the manga. In this chapter you see just how much naruto and celestia enjoy being around each other and from all the hints you see they do have feeling from each other but We've read why she tried to ignore them but why does naruto?
By the why, can you say when the next chapter will be out? I like to read more.
6997367 Good point that's coming up soon. I hope to have the new chapter out by Monday.
By the way, will Nyx eventually come see naruto as a father if she's going to twilight as a mother?
7024980 Do you really want to be spoiled?
Now that I think not really.
I was wondering if we would ever read more about Tia and Naruto's first meeting since it had to have left a major impression on Tia to trust Naruto as much as she did at the start of this story. The beginning of this chapter with Vivid Protector was a great way in showing just how much of a conflict some of the guard have in protecting their Princess and the love they hold for her. I do slightly feel for Vivid here but being nothing more then a loyal and faceless guard certainly doesn't make you appealing to the one you cherish. Hopefully nothing comes of it in the long run because even more dissension in the ranks of Equestria's military would spell ruin for the country.
Also you're killing me here with even more hints between the blindly in love duo here. Hopefully the two can finally see that they do in fact love one another or at least have Luna lock them in a spell proof room to settle said feelings.
7058984 Yes.
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Can anybody/pony can tell me what app is best to download this story for a android phone. I'm using google's book app, they have the epub something, I'm guessing do to the auto-read program I think. But it won't let even open the story. So........................... Help?
7144022 I would try asking the question in one of the popular forums.
7221198 You got to post him in one of my blogs. I don't check reviews for ocs.
Spot. On.
Ch.219 More Narlestia: Why won't they just make out already? - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
I know that I, a simple guardpony - Needed a Comma between the I and the A.
Luna would be so jealous if she heard him say that.
When will these get through the their skull if Celestia is in actual trouble at best they will be glorfied meat shields and at worst a hindarance as she tries to protect them while also fighting whoever she's fighting.