After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I suppose dealing with all the things that our protagonists have is bound to leave scars on their mental state. Interesting how certain people react to the presence of the Elements, I am getting an odd feeling that this might lead to some sort of control or oversight being forced on them to hold them accountable for their actions, and maybe condemnation of the Princesses for allowing those situations to occur. Still interesting ideas that have been brought up.
An idea I've always had for rainbow being everything her aspect is, is realizing that being loyal to someone doesn't always mean following them and supporting everything they do. Sometimes the most loyal thing you can do is stop someone from following a path that will ruin them, even if it strains the relationship you have.
7397496 That's actually a pretty excellent idea. Let's hope I remember it to incorporate the elements.
7399188 What I was trying to suggest without being overly emphasizing it was that most of these complaints were from people who new to the town. The issues are from the city migrants or those who don't know them personally hence the issues.
But also yes there is political plot points I am considering.
A bit rushed in certain areas her and there but an overall great way to build up on Pinkie as an character. I think you did well in adding your own spin on some of Pinkie's more used points within the fanfiction world.
God do I hate "Cupcakes" and its dozen of clones that paint Pinkie as a psychopath. As I've stated multiple times Pinkie to me has always been a more complicated character then she is portrayed as in the show but certain characteristics were easily twisted in the wrong ways. Her break down during her birthday being the biggest misconception and generating a good amount of poorly written dark fic's that continue to grow even today. Yeah, I will say some are actually good stories but most are copy and pasted trash trying to be "Cupcakes" 2.0. Here, we at least have a legitimate reason for an evil Pinkamena given she had chaos energy flowing through her veins since birth and Discord mind rape of her probably didn't help matters.
It certainly explains why Pinkie could have split personalities given her home life was smack dab on a bed of chaos and being a young child with little to no positive interactions until the Rainboom things of that nature could happen. Forgetting an imaginary friend yet still having them locked up inside is a great way of adding Surprise and Pinkamena to the mix so suddenly. It certainly adds things up into just how Pinkie seems a bit erratic at times given that both of her other persona's were fighting to either take control or keep her as she was.
Anyway, again this was a great chapter and I'm happy to see the story continue to grow and develop more and more in both character and the scope what is to come. Can't wait to see how a more in balance Pinkie Pie will be as the story continues.
7402124 Hopefully the new additions get used to what most of Ponyville considers to the norm. I don't think either Naruto or Twi can handle more peacekeeping if this keeps up lol.
Of course Pinkie has chaos magic