After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Well the subplot is lose thread tie-ins to the finale of the Nightmare Arc. Leading into much of the backstory of the nega-six and stuff like that. You know me, stuff I put in at chapter 23 coming in like a hundred chapters later. XD
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I will be going a rather different and highly satisfying route which culminates in all the character development the characters have been given for the big reveal.
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Yeah, needed to do good Changelings and Evil Changelings plotline somehow. XD
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Thank god I can work with what I have so her season five backstory can still be tweaked. XD
6631369 Lol since when do I not have that?
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When you have a villain whose species powers are based around stealth, deception, and seduction its a waste to have them be a megalomaniac. Give them the added traits of being highly intelligent, but pragmatic and having shades of grey morality to make them flexible.
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You discovered our secret. Kyuubi16 is two writers.
6607610 That was a continuity error. I have long since fixed it.
6605828 Commissions aren't cheap you know.
Great amount of action this chapter even if it was a bit rushed in some spots. Chrysalis giving off the warrior princess vibe in the brief assassination attempt was a highlight here. So far I'm definitely enjoying how this arc is progressing compared to its canon counterpart. Now I just wonder how they were able to weaken Cadence in the first place.
Wait, wasn't there supposed to be a different Queen impersonating Chrysalis?
I was expecting the real Chrysalis to fly in and then have some serious confrontation go down.
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What? How did you....did you really not catch on to what happened?
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I may have missed something.
6649124 Oh I get it, the evil changeling queen impersonating Chrysalis made Cadence's mind corrupt, that or after she dealt with Cadence she impersonated her.
Well Chrysalis is a pretty good fighter. So the riot was a diversion to make the switch and frame Chrysalis for the attack. The interrogation went as you would expect but Naruto managed to get through to her and find out what's going on. This is a interesting take on Chrysalis, she isn't a control freak, narcissist, psychopath, or a megalomaniac, she's a smart, pragmatic leader that truly cares about her hive and more than that a mother that love her daughter. She's much better than in canon and I hope to see more of her.