After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I went the opposite of the show. Out of Focus instead of Spotlight Stealing Squad. But yeah I got the weapons, now to work on ideas for the outfits.
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Mumm-ra won't be a villain. I would never finish the story if I try to make too many other series major segments.
Fairly good amount of action within this chapter. Naruto and Sombra's final battle battle was certainly a treat showing both opponents to be on equal terms outside of specific moments and the flow of said battle was just as good as most of the fights in the last arc of season two. I definitely enjoyed Spike's more believable role as the hero to the Crystal Empire here compared to canon as it showed a great amount of growth from the Spike we all know from the show and his early stages in this fic.
A bit close to the canon offering here but Sombra's moments in the spotlight were light years ahead of his canon counterpart. This was certainly a great way to set up the action and suspense for season three!
Ch.213 The Empire Finale:Hero of the Heart! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
Well Sombra was certainly more threatening here with a more freshout personality than in his premiere episode: arrogance, pompous, everything you'd expect from a self proclaimed king. Naruto didn't do to bad considering that he doesn't usually use swords. He probably could have beaten Sombra if he gone full power but instead he helped Spike do it by showing him how Sombra fights and what would work on him kinda like what Goku did with Cell for Gohan but better by not throwing him into the meat grinder and just hoping for the best. Spike really shined here, all that dragon training was well worth it. Well they stopped King Sombra and saved the Crystal Empire. They've certainly earned a long break before the trials ahead. A great start to season three.