After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Great chapter there.
Gotta wonder just how long Rarity will place the happiness of others above herself. Hope she grows some courage soon.
It's nice to see how much Shy likes Naruto and how. Rarity ships them despite own feelings for Naruto. Also, the date with Ditzy was cute and it's nice to see that Naruto is becoming bolder near the end of the date. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
Yeah ditzy is included l
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The Zecora situation was responsible for the gaps between those particular chapters. Not changeling but close.
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Nah, disappointing I know.
5506786 What were the exact words that were said about Zecora? A complete quote please, I want to confirm something.
Wish celestia would also join his list :D would be interesting to see luna and her fight for lead mare (if this really is a herd fic "which im wishing with everything i got it is") . i feel kinda sad for rarity, due to her generous side she puts her friends happiness over hers. hope she starts to accept her feelings and give it a shot :D.
I got to admire Rarity a lot in this chapter. While in the show we have her showing her element every once in a while, you seem to prove it time and time again that she is the only one who could be the holder of 'Generosity'. I mean, here is a mare who clearly loves a stallion and really would love to have him for herself, but is willing to put her friends happiness above her own just so she can be with the one she loves...if that is not the embodiment of generosity, I don't know what is.
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Was it in this chapter? I can hardly remember.
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Shoo they should hire me as one of the writers. XD.
Great bit of bonding between Fluttershy and Rarity. Out of all the Mane 6 I've always seen the two to have the easiest time together and not allow their emotions to get in the way. The two here have a surprisingly sisterly bond that I compare to being equal almost to Celestia and Luna's own relationship. Rarity as the helpful older sister who teases her sibling just enough and Fluttershy being the inexperienced but compassionate of the pair.
Fluttershy's flashback to when she figured out her feelings for Naruto was another excellent change of perspective that showed a great amount of detail. The relationship between Fluttershy and Naruto since this chapter certainly shows that the once sibling like bond the two had shared has now morphed into something way more complex that has probably surprised Naruto to no end. Sure, there are the obvious parallels between Flutters and Hinata but such comparisons do the story no justice. Fluttershy's growth from chapter 1 to the latest outpacing Hinata's by a landslide.
The date between Ditzy and Naruto was a simple but definitely nice start in getting these two together. I do feel for Carrot Top being roped into watching Dinky with her consent, but how can you say no to the sheer adorableness that is Dinky Do? The teasing near the end was a great way to break the ice between the two and help the future relationship begin. Now if only Ditzy wasn't such a lightweight Naruto wouldn't end up getting himself in such awkward moments with the bubbly mare.
Every time he coocked something I expected it to be ramen. This is the first time that it was actually true... I think...