After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Great story
Wasn't Rainbow Dash wearing shadowbolt costume?
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Meh there is allowances here and there.
Awesome chapter. Love your version of the episode.
So I’m a little confused, are we still in season 1 or are we in season 2 now? I’m only asking cause the episode this chapter is based off of is from season 2, but we haven’t even gotten to the Grand Galloping Gala or Discords return yet so I’m guessing you moved some of the episodes around for the sake of character development. I always did like this episode anyways so I really don’t have any problem with it. Luna’s development and her interactions with the other elements (minus Rainbow Dash of course) in this episode shows that since her return, she is trying to connect with her people like her sister and does show that she is slowly opening up to others.
5818394 I though so too but here the remnants of NMM's army are still at large ( including one confirmed Shadowbolt) dressing up as an enemy of the state could have pretty hefty repercussions.
5818535 Isn't Luna going to be part of Naruto's harem/herd?
Is trixie going to be part of the harem?
If I had to come up with a top five episodes for FIM, Luna Eclipse would be up there as an obvious contender for the number one spot. I understand the appeal that Luna has towards the fandom for her adorable attempts at becoming acclimatized to the future she's been thrust into after the Nightmare Moon saga and this episode did a perfect job in showcasing just that. Really outside of Naruto's parts the episode did a good job of following it canon counterpart in its enjoyment.
Naruto's view of Nightmare Night was a blast to read as it had a ton of character interactions that were perfectly written. Nothing seemed stilted or forced as each of the conversations with his herd and friends seemed very realistic given the circumstances of the night. I loved the bit with Ditzy and Dinky as it was as adorable as any scene with the little unicorn filly tends to be and Ditzy being a super mom is a bit of fanon that still works for me.
If there is one thing that has shocked me in rereading this chapter it was my overlooking of Naruto's attraction to Zecora. I just thought it was a passing bit of admiring on Naruto's part, but that turned out to be wrong on my part it seems.
i am suprised no one has post the meme so i shall The fun has been doubled!!
yeah, i cant post pictures
5818394 I have finally fixed that error.
my what a combo i just made wen i was reading this chap i was listening the mlp music Most Wonderful of Nights and wen i was reading the part were Luna says the fun has been doubled the music was at the same spot