After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I hate long goodbye
A couple of typos, but good chapter...
Oh man the feels!
Kinda reminds me when Naruto went with pervy Sage.
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Actually the "two, two, two times the fun" wasn't a typo. That was literally what pinkie said in that episode.
Thank you for not making this departure melodramatic! Yeah, we know Spike's going to be gone but its not like he's leaving for a suicide mission like some authors tend to make their one-shots around Spike's leaving. As Skye787 pointed out, the chapter felt very similar to Naruto's own trip when he left with Jiraiya at the end the first half of Naruto. Really the only two that should have shown such strong emotions were Sweetie and Twilight and both of them handled it as you would expect.
The gifts were a nice touch and were pretty much what you would expect from each of the ponies bidding the young drake farewell. Naruto giving Spike something other then a memento but actual techniques to better Spike's skills was a nice decision as it will probably be coming to use with his return. Sweetie better be prepared because I have a feeling that once Spike returns she'll be needing to keep an eye out for competition or taking after Rarity it showing others their place. I could definitely picture Spike as a typical anime protag with a dozen girls vying for his affection and Naruto and the others sitting on the sidelines for a good laugh.
The feels
Don'ttearupDon'ttearupDon'ttearup... Damnit!
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On my 4th re read.... and still tear up at this.
Exceptional writing.
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Rereading again.... Still tear up.
My heart....... why must you hurt me this way