After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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At long last! It lives!
PS. Twilight, the adorkable one
Hold your orgasms people! Its alive once again!!
Few things are as sweet as adorkable Twilight.
The date with Twilight was adorable.
You have a gift for adorable moments, truly heartwarming.
You live! Dude, even the Shinju Tree on Steroids would stop me from reading your story. It is one of the few NarutoxMlp I can take seriously. Others seem to fall short on the sort of stuff I enjoy. So keep on keeping on.
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Well not just Ponyville. Its a ratio in a lot of areas throughout the nation where while having a higher female ratio is the norm, its not completely dominating throughout the entire nation like nearly every other fic. In several major cities, such as Canterlot the numbers are more equal.
Think of it like the common issue of rich people have fewer kids while poorer people have more. In major cities there is a more monogamous mindset which is also the common mindset in certain towns and communities throughout the nation. Because of this there is less Polygamy which leads to stallion siring less children in that area which means not as many mares born in that area and less of a need to form such large herds.
Also cities having enticing offers of higher pay and benefit for stallions that draw them in to that communities which is also a callback to in during American history where job offers and opportunities would draw in other people from other nations looking to make a new life and would often send in whatever money they make back to their families.
The era of tech for the show is kind of all over the place so its a bit of a mix-match of technologies and eras that I'm still trying to work out.
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It's taking me a while to get to those bits I admit, but I'm working towards it. Most stories, professional and otherwise just rush to the good bits without any consideration that such things in real life would take time. It would take time to build up your army and get resources which I am working towards.
Ahh, so at long last I've caught up....
This has been sitting around my read later box for a while and I finally decided to knock it out.
Aside from the few grammatical errors that my mind auto-corrected, some occasional instances of anthro/pony confusion, and some perspective inconsistencies a few chapters back, ( I.E. Using first person narrative instead of third) this has, and hopefully will continue to be, a fantastic read.
I commend you for your work and eagerly await the next installment.
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Yeah needed to fix some continuity errors.
Will Naruto meet any of the Girl's families? *Coff* Milf *Coff*
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Yes
You know, ever since you started the ‘Date’ chapters, this was the one I was looking forward to the most. I absolutely find Twilight adorable and to see you keep that adorableness throughout this chapter really made my day. Even the small things like her dancing and stargazing really make it enjoyable. Maybe it’s because I love your Naruto x Twilight one-shot on Fanfiction so much, but this was one of my favorites.
OK, so far I gotta give props for make each and every one of Naruto's dates unique. I've seen way, way too many authors fall into the monotony of going through the same dating structure for each mare. I find it highly unlikely that the Mane 6 would appreciate having their dates become carbon copies of each other with [Insert Protagonist Here]. You've put thought into making each unique even with a simple twist here or there.
It's also nice to see that Naruto isn't the perfect ladies man and makes mistakes during the dates themselves. Sure, some of the dates were a little too perfect at first glance but there was a feeling of awkwardness between the characters that made up for it. I mean come on dating your friends compared to associates can be downright nerve wracking for most.
So far I feel that Twilight's date with our lovable fishcake was the most realistic seeing as Twilight isn't the most sociable of mares in season one of the show. We got to see a nice glimpse into her vulnerabilities while Naruto shot each of them down as being minor or nonexistent. It was similar to Ditzy's date at first glance but felt a bit more fleshed out through the actions taken throughout the date itself. I can't wait until the inevitable Rainbow chapter because from the hints earlier on our favorite stunt mare may have some baggage weighing her down compared to the others.