After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Another good chapter
This chapter was great. I liked the way that PP teased Naruto in this chapter and how flustered Shy became around him during the sponge/bath/bedroom incident. I also like how thoughtful of relationships Pinkie is in this version, as it makes her look more mature than her personality/appearance suggests. Hope to see either the AJ interview or the 150% More Applejack soon because this is getting interesting. BTW, will Twilight get an interview or a 150% segment?
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Its funny you mention that. I just conceived ideas for both a few minutes ago. I wanted to keep Pinkie Pie in character while actually giving her some character depth. I think characters work well when you balance them by having them have a few moments of character outside their key character trait.
Nicely done! Showed Pinkie as more than a two dimensional giggle box.
Had a few more errors than usual, and some of them were just silly. You called Pinkie 'People' instead at one point. Laughed my tail off at that!!!
Naruto has got to be either the luckiest or unluckiest stallion ever, depending on how you look at the situation. It's also nice to see that you have your characters act a little differently from what they normally are, allows you to give them just the right ammount of character depth, without making them too different from what makes them, them. I also like how your portraying the Naruto x Pinkie Pie realtionship. While she does like to tease him every once in a while, you can tell that she really does care about him and does like him, but she's willing to give Rarity a chance first. And I don't know, there's just something about the way this is being portrayed that I love.
Last chapter definitely seemed to open Naruto's eyes in that he isn't in top form just yet, but that is understandable seeing as he hasn't yet had to deal with numerous amounts of overpowered enemies on a daily basis. It is concerning that he went right back to his old method of over training to compensate for the time lost in Equestria. It reminds me a lot of the initial Rasengan training and ending each session by passing out. It's a good thing that the girls are concerned enough to stop such methods instead of pushing him to do so like most in Konoha would have done.
Funnily enough, waking up to Pinkie is probably not that big of a surprise for the orange-furred ninja. Given that she is probably the second closest of the Mane 6 towards Naruto at this point he see's this as a normal Pinkie Pie greeting. The same should be said for Fluttershy that randomly having a pink party pony break into her house is most likely tame when it comes too Pinkie. You don't question the Pink One. Especially when this version of Pinkie isn't just a pointless comedic throw in.
It's because of this fact that I enjoy this story's Pinkie Pie focused chapters simply for the fact that this is probably the most balanced attempt at her character. As her thoughts showed here, Pinkie isn't just an overly childish airhead who grates on the nerves. No, she's actually one of the more perceptive mares within the Mane 6 just that she see's things in a different way from the norm. It also still helps that she has the easiest time of flustering our protagonist.
Hey Kyuubi, Love the story. I've started reading it on fanfiction but prefer reading it here. Quick question, from this chapter onwards none of the pictures are loading in, I don't know if it's a problem on my end or what. Is there somewhere else I can see the images? Aside from that, I'm greatly enjoying your work. Peace friend.
Yeah so when you get a chance might want to go through the story again as some of the pics are looking broken.
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Alright fixed it.