After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Okay...
Do I ?
Or dont?
This will be har decision.
but judging for the rate between likes and dislikes are discouranging me
But Just the description atract me and the fact that is naruto who is here just ...
I don't know.
YOLO i guess
6387043 Good portion of the dislikes are because of crossover and anthro tags as is common for a lot of series.
6387077 I've never heard Rewrite performed in English. It's pretty good.
Also, great chapter.
Oh one my favorite opening from full metal alchemist original.
6387739 NOrmally I would agree, Naruto -has- been getting most of the plot related ladies, but about trix....She has just -now- realized she has feelings for him as well as accepting that she's got a long road ahead of her to be forgiven. Also, I want to point out that even though she's trying to court him, there is a chance that this doesn't work out and they just end up being really close friends. and another point, if what you said was true, Naruto would also be having Celestia in his herd instead of just Luna, but she doesn't see him like that.......so far granted, but still, I wouldn't jump to that conclusion so quickly.
Oh and fun chapter mate, can't wait to see the next xhapter and find out what becomes of this!
6387739
If you're dislike of the character is making you feel this way, then hey, its time to jump ship now. I am at least doing my best to put substance and thought in the romance behind the harem aspect. Its been known as a harem for over sixty chapters or so, so its not like I deceived any of you. If you feel you can not handle this story then its best to leave now.
Hm, so Trixie is one of the final two mares to enter the herd? I can't say its surprising that she may become another herd member but from her last couple of interactions with Naruto it was looking plain as day. We all should know that Naruto has found the wandering magician attractive since Boast Busters and the same could be said from Trixie as well. Since she's returned, I've found that my initial disinterest in her has thawed and I feel that she makes a great sounding board/rival for Twilight in magical studies since she is handier in the more subtle arts then Twilight who's magical prowess tends to push towards the stronger magic's of Equestria.
Can't wait to see how this development continues. I feel that this relationship may start off on an awkward foot since Trixie's experience with stallions are pretty much 0 to dating lug heads.
6387834 Lol are you saying you'll jump ship if Celestia joins in? Bail out now. XD. I mean come on, in normal horse herds in real life I believe the numbers go what, 6 to 8 at their maximum. Yes there is a beta male in some of those herds, but this is a world of magic a little leeway can be forgiven.
Unlike most stories I at least spend so much time on building the romance and focusing on the females all being their unique characters so if a story is dismissed over something like the harem number and not the quality of the plot, characterization, and all that then that speaks of a problem with the reader who is willing to ignore a potential gem because it doesn't fir their pre-set ideas of what is quality.
The opening is epic and exciting. Well it's good that Twilight and Trixie are becoming friends and comparing their magical notes, theories and skills since they can benefit from each others in many ways. Twilight's maturing romantically by the way she described her thoughts on her relationship. From her skepticism, Trixie's been burned a few time. What Naruto did for Trixie was very sweet and it's good that she's slowly gaining friends she knows she can trust. A sweet dream indeed. So Beatrix is her real name or close friends and family can call her. Well Trixie's taking her first steps into her new loving family and the way Twilight described it was just beautiful. It's amazing how one choice can change someone future like how Twilight's choice to take Trixie in let's her grow into a better pony much sooner than in canon.