After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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5250746
I had to redo it, not enough character interaction or fight scenes.
5251039
I would say 2nd best chapter easily.
One if the best chapters yet.
5251197 Hands but hooves for feet.
“Applejack we can’t leave him!” Fluttershy practically wailed as she watched her new friend before forced on the defensive.
Applejack inwardly cursed knowing that Fluttershy was far too kind to abandon anypony or any creature. She also considered the fact that even if they did run there was a possibility that the Chimera would lose and the creature continued after them
you said to let you know put it in insed of manticore
Fluttershy's dad could easily be one badass son of a b***h if we get to see him some more later on. Applejack's fight against the Manticore was great and it's nice to see that Rarity experince in her flashback has toughened her up and made her stronger. I also do want to see more of Hot Shot later on since we barely got to see much of her, but she did leave an impact on us (at least for me)
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Very diverse fights between each of the groups. Fluttershy did take some unneeded risks due to her caring nature and that may come back to bite her if they're not address but she and AJ held their own well enough. The arrival of Flutter's father was a timely intervention and he still seems to be a pretty competent leader. Nice to see the guard still making some headway against the Nightmare Forces.
Pinkie and Rarity's bouts were about what I would expect between the fashionista and the party mare. Pinkie herself is probably a nightmare to confront that probably compares to drunken-fist Lee. Rarity showing that her magic is not to be trifled with is a nice change from the usual damsel in distress mode she finds herself roped into.
The highlight here was of course Rainbow and Hot Streak's fight. It was a very dynamic fight with the fact that it was in the air. Some people just can't manage to write air based combat without it coming out flat but this was pretty good and keeps the readers attention. Hot Streak is still one of the more interesting members of the Nightmare's army and I hope that when the final fight comes in season 2 we see round two between her and Dash.
I guess its the brainwashing that's making the Timberwolves fight like this. So Fluttershy's dad is kind and dotting to his daughter yet ruthless and merciless to anyone who would try to hurt her. Pinkie fights as how you would expect her to: completely unpredictable, and Rarity is definitely a lot stronger than she was with the satyrs. Huh Rainbow using her head instead of just rushing in is a good start of her character growth.