After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I'm doing a chronological order of events so it makes sense instead of just relying on viewing order. It requires more thought and planning.
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Its just a matter of looking into their characters.
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Yeah, yeah indeed.
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Yeah when you do so little with one of your main antagonists, especially the starting ones that is never a good thing. I love adaption expansion. Its so much fun to do.
When I do the final mix version of these chapters I might expand the party a bit more. Yeah you will never see Naruto x Rarity from anybody else. I can almost 100% guarantee it. If its not Twilight its Luna. Making all the others work beyond a rushed oneshot/lemon takes too much time and effort. XD.
But of course. As of lately I glanced at my hahaaha 'competition' in this kind of regards of Seventh Element/Reimagning of the series. Bland/uninteresting super powered OCs. (When your OC can match/beat Discord its just ridiculous. Especially with the Seventh Element reveal when little time or effort was put into developing the bond between some rushed romance bits thrown in between 9o% canon content of the show. Especially even more worthless or useless when they keep to canon so strictly to where there OC (especially the ridicolous ones where they have viewed the show) is basically useless.), no changes to plots, and all that.
I mean what's the point in having another character who has knowledge or potential and they don't use it? Filler/comedy episodes you can get away with it, but if the character you write is supposed to be Genre savvy/intelligent then they shouldn't be window dressing they should be effective. To get back on track I'm not impressed by much of the competition because what's the point of making them powerful when they are either ineffective or render the main six useless? And if that happens, oh no, oc villain too strong and choke holds the story. its just ridiculous.
All and all that's why I'm trying to include more and more characters and add more and more to the lore whenever and however I can. To spend more time and focus on the character. I still haven't even come close to the surface of exploring everything I want with the characters. I still want to add so much more lore and backstory for all of them that this will be the wordiest story on the site give it a few months or so. XD.
To get back on track there should be more Rare or Fluttershy centric stories for these obscure pairings. XD.
Oh right NM vs Celestia moment. That's what started this tangent. Yeah I wanted to actually show the confrontation and explain or show what happened. If there is something I hate then its Offscreen events happening with either no decently handled exposition or flashbacks to rill us in on what happened. I wanted to avoid that of course.
Anyone who sees Celestia as a troll (None playful kind) or Manipulative is an idiot. I can understand how her character type can use manipulation, but not in a malevolent way or for malevolent reasons. I'm sorry but any and all evil celestia stories, no matter how written is just a case of stupidity unless its an AU and even then it ignores the point of the character. Celestia can be imperfect, but she can't be a dictator or evil or she would have never been able to Use the Elements of Harmony not once but twice. Its sad so much of the fandom is quite frankly...incredibly stupid.
Lol I can't remember their reactions. I really need to go back and start editing these chapters. I feel retarded for not checking how good my editors are. The really competent ones I got doing chapters in the 90 instead of starting from the beginning. Problem is most of them are just so slow that I'll just have to pick a day and edit the story myself. No offense to the good ones, but they're always so busy with life.
Yeah. I liked the Guard being somewhat effective. I hate everyone is completely useless compared to the heroes when they're supposed to be guards/soliders/etc in settings because its like, how did they ever do anything prior to the heroes if they're that incompetent? The major villains who only the heroes have the power to beat? Okay I can buy, but don't make them all completely incompetent or useless against everything.
A drunken Ditzy is a funny Ditzy
Damn, Ditzy certainly seems to have the easiest time making Naruto stutter about like a kid on his first date. Then again I'm probably bias to the nth degree. Nice to see Vinyl and Octavia make an appearance and some hints of Naruto's beginnings in Equestria. Overall fun chapter but you may want to take a look at the first sentence again due to some slight errors. Nothing major, but the rest of the chapter was spotless from what I gathered.
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Yeah indeed. You excited about continuing to reread the rest of the Nightmare Arc?
6300876 Yep, I'm half-way through Five Virtues right now and I should have a review up in a bit. I think I may have rushed through this arc because I missed some things lol.
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Yeah definitely re-read it. I usually go back and edit content.
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Yeah, I don't like the overshadowing of main characters that a lot of these fics do because it makes it about their super powered oc and craps on the main characters.
Once again I like adding little details. It makes sense for them to have a place to go to if something ever happens in town.
I hate the human obsession thing for the most part because its not funny or even a good plot device. Only very few people do it right and its when they focus on the romance and attraction instead of the obsession part.
Uugh those scene forces. I really hate the scene forces.
Its a shame she's gone. I really, really need to find another artist and soon.
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Its always good to have some sort of depth to the villain. Makes things more interesting.
Yea I would do the same.
Poor Amethyst.
...*snicker*...