After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Very fast paced chapter here. It covered a lot of ground following the Equestrian forces as they battled against the hoard of enemies that Radiance and Shadow Fright have unleashed on Equestria's soil. Each and every fight written here gave just enough to catch my interest yet didn't go stale before each transition. Shining Armor and Shine Sparks roles here stood out the most seeing as both there scenes were probably the best written.
I loved the fact that Shining Armor actually went into battle here and came away pretty much A-OK. Seen to man fics where Twi's big bro is kind of a hot headed fighter in battle. This time around he definitely showed off some moves that made me believe he earned his rank even if he kind of left himself hanging wide open. Amber Wands should definitely get a months worth of free meals for that save!
So I'm guessing that Hot Streak was somehow given away/foalnapped as a baby/child? I figured that she was related to Spitfire in some way but this brutal yet effective reveal was a cool way to allow that revelation to burst free. I can't see Flare throwing a child away willingly so possible foalnapping turned to brainwashing maybe? I don't know but I can't wait for this to be expanded on as the arc progresses.
Shine Spark's hasty retreat back to Dusk was very well paced and showed that Twi's aunt isn't as trigger happy as she seemed during the negotiation attempt back in season 1. It was also cool to see that she is even more badass then Shining when things get serious. I'd definitely wouldn't want to oppose her in combat with her skill set.