After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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How many seasons will this story have?
7543883 Eight.
I liked this chapter
7543899 wow that's a lot seasons but keep up the updates on this story and I really love the chapter so much
I read up to chapter 83, this is an amazing story (the pacing is a little strange) and overall I can see why quite a few people like this, but I'm sorry to say that this just isn't my cup of tea. Keep up the good work though! You get a like for being a good author.
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for you're next update
Also are you using all the OC's in the story or specifically picked ones?
7544315 What about the pacing did you find strange?
7544622 All of them.
7547063 it's a little sporadic, its jumping from scene correctly, but then there is no transition to smooth that process, it's a little hard to adjust to swapping from scene to scene so rigidly. But other than that the story is great!
7547063 Looking forward to it then
7547086 I am currently going back and reediting the older chapters.
when you asked for oc's i thought of a succubus pony looking for redemption, so what about something like that?
7550272 Yeah sure that's fine.
Definitely a great Dash-focused chapter here, dude. Outside of the obvious growth in Dash it was fun to read about her noticing the parallels between both her and Lightning Dust. I never really liked the original episode as it kinda fell flat in showing Dash competing and learning from her mistakes while having Lightning show no growth at all in the end. Dash was great throughout this chapter and you nailed Spitfire's officer persona perfectly.
Also the lime that opened this chapter was grade A material and not to over the top compared to some. Rarity and Naruto's relationship is probably the best highlight nowadays in the pairings as they are the main couple in this story and is never overshadowed when the other girls get their share of Naruto's attention. Now I'm just waiting for the Tia fluff to hopefully begin soon, ya know?
I've never been the biggest fan of LD, but I do at times enjoy the random redemption story featuring her. That and outside of her abrasive personality she and Dash could be good friends. Just don't expect the others to get on well with her.
Ch.239 Rainbow Goes to the Academy! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
The way you put "causing her to giggle" twice seems a little off to me.
What ever happen to "adorkable"? It seemed like such a Cute term for Twilight.
"just being has been" sounds a bit off to me.
Yeah Lightning Dust doesn't care about those who follow her.