After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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cool new pic
Academy? What happened to Magic Kindergarten?
I like the new cover art but I also liked the old one
Great chapter! Loved how you tied in Lesson Zero to what Discord did. I Like it when stories do that. And yeah great pictures!
I have to say that if FiM were focused on a slightly older demographic this chapter would be what I would want for Lesson Zero. I never really liked the episode in the first place since it kind of came out of left field after the big two part season opener. The sudden appearance of Twilight's mania from such a minor oversight just rubbed me the wrong way when by the episode's end it was just seen as "Twilight being Twilight". It was such a major character shift that I was surprised that most of the fandom just went with it when clearly something was wrong and has been wrong with Twilight since then. Sure maybe I'm overthinking the fact that she seems to have at least one major blow up every season but the manic persona she took from Lesson Zero was basically resolved with a pat on the head and kind words. Overall the actual canon episode is certainly near the bottom of my list.
Naruto's concern was a very refreshing break from the norm of using Lesson Zero as an attempt at slapstick or "daw its silly Twilight" and gave the reader a chance to be concerned about an obvious problem that Twilight's friends ignored. Both in the canon showing and here you are definitely left wondering about how everyone else is holding up after they were basically mindfucked by a devious god who shows little concern for others. The Mane 6 were the major targets of this action and its sad that Naruto overlooked it due to the fact that he was just happy to have them physically safe and sound. It will be interesting to see if this is a theme throughout the rest of the season because from the teaser it seems that they will be needing it as things aren't as kosher within Equestria as it may seem.
Great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
6265513 They did away with that after magic preschool exploded.
Man I'm starting to hate discord
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i like his gender bent self or daughter in most stories they exist in cause they are pretty chill compared to male discord in most stories
Interesting point.