After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Actually I was about to go into details of who and such dressed in what armor and all but I opted not too giving a base description of Chrysalis Chevaliars in armor to give people a faint description or appearance until I came up with something else. I'm not the best at outfit designs and I tend to go back and add those extra details when I go back over chapters.
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I'm commissioning a season one, one that will feature Ditzy and will just have a season 3 one with everyone.
I was always wonder, Would it make more sense for Queen Chrysalis to absorb the love from Cadence being the goddess of love/princess of love. I mean think about it they establish she spread love to other ponies couples so why would the changeling make her like a battery source like controlling her by using her to spread love the the ponies population thus absorbing the love from them, heck absorbing the love from cadence herself and have her produced more love to absorb.
So far this has been my favorite chapter in a while. The story is certainly one of the most entertaining here on the site but this chapter really sticks to me and its really just all set up for the Wedding Arc! The fact that its all in Chrysalis' POV is the main reason for my love of it. Sure the two previous chapters including the Changeling Queen were high points as well but this one takes the cake in effectively building up just how this Chrysalis is compared to her inferior canon self. Her personality alone makes her out to be a competent ruler who can actually use her brain when it comes down to it. Her interactions between the Sisters, Cadence, and Naruto were supremely well done and gave us a great look into just how clever your Chrssy is in effectively planning how to help her people. Swapping places with Cadence is a fool's errand, but in the face of her starving people it would be the only thinkable solution if Tia didn't show up with peace talks. The fact her reaction to Naruto's dropping of said plan wasn't over the top also shows that this character isn't as easy to fool as most make her out to be but someone who, once given the right amount of time and resources, can be a scary enemy to face if the situation pops up.
Really can't wait to see how this arc plays out and just what happened to Chrysalis' daughter.
He is very wise and very smart.
This camp sound like its seen some action and since its in neutral territory its the perfect place for a political meeting. its great that Celestia and Luna encouraged Cadance when she was having doubts. Well it was said that Fluttershys mother work in the Equestia government in his interview of her, so it makes since she would be there for the meeting and Naruto being there is good since he's one of their best captains. Well Chrysalis's Chevaliars sound tough and good at their jobs and Chrysalis herself comes off as smarter and more pragmatic and actually caring about her hive and not just about ruling them. Seem like a interesting talk so far, Ponies and Changelings being able to live together would be a good first step to peace between both species. It seem like Chrysalis has a little budding respect for Naruto. so Naruto and Luna feel so strongly for each other that Chrysalis can taste it, then can she sense Celestia's feeling for Naruto? Overall nice setup for the wedding and looking forward to seeing more of your version of everyone's favorite Changeling Queen since she's a more dynamic character.