After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I'll admit that I was the tiniest bit... frustrated with this chapter after reading the title.
A fine job of misdirection if I've ever seen one. 'At long last' applying to Naruto's past and not their potential relationship.
At least this will lead to advancing their relationship one way or another.
I don't know how the hell you did it but you made memory foam matters a reference
When I first saw the title I was all like what am i going to suspect her
Frankly speaking, I just thought it was time for rarity to have her turn with our favorite blond
Nice to see Naruto is about to reveal his past. Still,the title was misleading.
You incomparable tease
...You little tease! I actually read the title of this chapter and was expecting Rarity to finally tell Naruto how she feels, but after reading it I came to a realizaton. 'At long last' didn't actually mean Rarity was finally going to confess, it meant Naruto was at long last, going to tell Rarity his past...you clever one you. But in all, this chapter was good. We got to see a little more of Rarity's love for Naruto finally pushing her and the kiss was really nice too (even if Naruto was asleep for it) I'm hoping Rarity says something soon, I'm really rooting for them to get together.
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Well this is one of the greatest moment of all time. That's the difference between planning something or saying you did but pulling it out of your ass. It shames, I came up with most of this on the spot when we have professional writers who have so much more time often produce garbage with years of practice.
Very realistic account on just how the chaos surrounding Ponyville is effecting the economy of the town itself. You don't see this type of tidbit used often in most fanfics seeing as it tends too not further the plot in most stories. Here though the devastation that Ponyville and its citizens face on a weekly basis is really starting to show. Taxes are never a great thing and a small town like Ponyville can only do so much without some sort of aid.
Rarity's POV here was a great look into her complex thoughts surrounding Naruto and her affection towards him. It was very much in character for her and didn't include too much exposition. It was just enough that it didn't become a melodramatic cringe fest where she denied her feelings. Sure, Rarity may think she's being selfish but its blatant too everyone else that the two are very much attracted to one another at this point. The chapter certainly did a good job in giving the two a starting point to where they are now in the story.
I'm getting the feeling that things are about to change for better or worse....
*inhale*---*exhale* ...You sir, are a troll.
*teeth grinding* You little... now I have to sit here and think about what would have happened had the chapter gone in the direction I thought it would have!
Ya damn tease had me getting my hopes up. If you were any other author Iād be threatening the pitchfork treatment š