After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Omg, how beautiful this chapter is. Usually I read fics where Scootaloo is a filly from a abusive home or just outright an orphan. What a nice change of pace this is. Naru-daddy is back. Scootaloo with so many moms, wonder how'll that go.
Amazing work as always, I wish I could add more for a review, but none is really needed.
Don't forget Aunt Belle and Auntie Bloom. Or sister Dinky.
Well, that was certainly an intimate lime between Dash and Naruto.
Nice take on the overused orphan Scootaloo trope. If there's one trope overused here on fimfic its the, "woe is Scootaloo for she's alone" category that has built up on the site. Sure, some of these are high quality but most are abuse/angst ridden sad fics that annoy me to no end. At least here we have a way better change up in that her caretaker actually does care for the filly and isn't just using her for a paycheck. Bright Smile's cameo may have been brief but it certainly showed she was a good mare in heart.
Another thing to applaud about this chapter is not falling into RD adopting Scoot's with little too no questions asked. Sure, they're great as a sisterly pair but canon Dash is probably the least likely to be able to care for Scoots by herself at this point in the series. It's why I usually enjoy the Twilight adopts Scootaloo fics more then I should since Twilight is somewhat more realistic in caring for her.
Naruto taking on the role as a dad again should be interesting. I assume the scars aren't as healed as he puts on and I hope that he can overcome the lost of his kids while giving Scoot's the best care she could have under his roof. It sucks that he can't instantly adopt her but that is another detail commonly overlooked in adoption fics. If we went by fanon Equestrian standards, then adopting a kid would be as easy as buying a parking lot puppy that's for sale. Frustrating when such an important detail is overlooked for a quick and easy read.
6381082 Problem is that premise is overused. I can understand using some of the elements, even I'm using it, but you want to avoid overdoing it. So I found the nice balance in her having a loving adopted mom for a few years it makes it more tragic and believable instead of ultra angtsy like some fics.
Please write more this story its swell I love it you're doing fantastic on it
6383841 Lol, thats the difference between me and the common people. I actually spend more than a few seconds planning and thinking things out. The best thing is not to do the exact opposite to prove to be different, that's trying too hard, but to tweek things and come up with your own original visions.
Poor scootaloo
lol I read that as 'Joy Burger'
This chapter...
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