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This is all being redone
Well, well. I didn't expect this to continue or restart. About time that it did though!
I must admit, when you said it was anthro, I was rather worried, but now that I've seen a little of whats to come, I can honestly say that those fears are gone. Keep going! This gonna be good!
5195099
Indeed it is.
5195204
What about Anthro part were you worried about?
Wait. What? when did they become bi-peds?
5195279
The mere fact that it was anthro. I've had some rather bad experiences with anthro stories...
This story seems interesting.
5195740
Sorry, but its not something I want to relive... *shudder*
great to see this story alive again.. even if its remade... since its remade im kinda hoping for a harem route
hope to see your next chapter soon
cheers!!!!
5199138 So is it safe to assume then that eventually Naruto will get into a relationship with a or some mares?
5209241
Yes indeed.
this is pretty good ^_^ i can see how it's different though i like it ^_^
5210482
Exactly that's why I like to do rewriters.
Awesome chapter. I like the rewrite version of RD's first appearance.
5210663
Definitely one my favorite parts of the revision.
I love this chapter.
5210887
I know, I went ham this chapter. Definitely the best one I written thus far.
Rarity's definitely going to be his 1st mare
Ummm, no offense, but you have a lot of typos and missing commas here. Do you have an editor?
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You know just saying that is pointless. It helps out if you point out where they're needed. No I don't have an editor I used a program and fixed it up based on that.
You seem to jump form using hands to using hoofs. That needs to be addressed.
Aside from that i'm enjoying the story.
Keep up the good work.
Though the chapter was short, I enjoyed Naruto's flashback about how he met Fluttershy.
5212266 Sorry, I thought the program was better than this, butt I've never personally used it.
I'll pre-read if you need it.
5212510
Okay, now that's helpful, thank you. Quite honestly the version of the program I used remove the grammar check function which sucks. I'll get on to repairing the chapter.
5212510
Yeah okay I post the wrong version. I know half the errors you pointed out I had corrected in a document.
5213702
You want to be my official beta? No matter what programs I use they seem to miss these errors and its annoying.
5212656
Hooves still refer to the feet. Otherwise a result of missing the term from the result of the rewriter.
5216611 sure! I'm only human, so I will miss some.
:D
I enjoyed seeing how everybody in town ships Naruto with Rarity. I also found the appearance of NM in the story to be more epic than its canon counterpart.
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Yeah well I wanted to elaborate more on Celestia's capture as well as work in Alicorn Amulet instead of it being a random one off weapon. Having it be a creation of Nightmare Moon's to Bolster her powers seems like a good idea. The reason why she needed this Amulet will of course be shown in a much later arc. XD.
Also you think this is fun? You're going to enjoy the humor parts of where everypony in town is shipping Naruto with somepony or another with this big gambling pool involved.
i cant remember if you said in the original but where in the story was Naruto before he was sent to equestria?
The fighting match ups are interesting.
5226257
Was never stated.
Yup, Rarity should definitivaly be the pairing, or ir this fic is a harem one, then the first Mare to confess to him
5224909 So it begins...
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I do have plans to make a fic with just that pairing though. Probably on Deviantart. I definitely have the images for it.
Nice chapter.
Great chapter :D
Meh it's ok
5199138 got to say still like the story but a little mad at you for dropping the old one I really got into that one
5209241 that was his original plan to begin with