After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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7797693 Because Whirlpool is a translation of Uzumaki. It makes sense because of the naming conventions in the world he is from. Its to give the inhabitants an easy understanding who Rarity is with once the name Whirlpool becomes more established as Naruto increases his influence.
7795941 Oi. Ask my fans on ffnet. I'm also messing up my posting wrong chapters or versions of my chapter that I decide to rewrite multiple times. Ask the ones who read my Warrior of Omnitrix stories about my inability to decide if its Ben or Naruto or a Naruto displacing Ben. XD. I know it seems sketchy and some people do some sketchy stuff, but honestly, when I do rewrites from time to time I'm lazy and never fully go over my changes relying on the fact I fixed the mistakes the first time I rewrite something. Anyone who knows the original version of this story or the first rewrite can you tell you about all the times I messed up and didn't correct the hoof/hooves mistake when the original draft of this story had them as ponies and not anthros.
This is why I'm always asking for betas. I always do things better the second time around as opposed to the first as I always work on improving.
7795543 This makes me so damn mad because I actually did put ear. Stupid spellcheck.
839,126 words total and it's still not complete! Just how long will this story be?
7823694 I love this story a lot can't wait for more uploads to this story I'll be waiting my friend and please keep me posted on the story
There's so much to take in from this chapter that its hard enough to put it into words. Whatever dark and dreary future we caught a glimpse of sounds absolutely terrifying as Strife seemingly conquered Equestria as if it was nothing. Naruto losing his loved ones in a very similar matter as before he ended up in Equestria hits home the fact that bad luck follows in his stead. My first guess at the being who awoke from this glimpse of a future that could be is Xer, but knowing you it could be just about anyone.
To top it off, both Luna and Naruto look to be going MIA for a good chunk of this arc and leaves everything in the hands of a still healing Tia and the rest of the Elements. Hopefully Naruto's training was enough for the guard as they combat this newest force vying for the world of Equus. Things have certainly gotten off to the wrong foot in Equestria's case.
Ch.252 Mechanical Empire: Dawn of a New Threat! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
It will be a while before I can read and get used to the idea of the story having a small part of the fall of equestria universe in this story.